Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 24 Nov 2023 2:14 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a totally gripping opening chapter. I like the different POVs.
Title: Chapter 1 16 Aug 2016 8:14 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    How in the world have I never read this before? Someone was complimenting it in the chat box and I had to have a look myself. Love the story so far, even though I had to break out the dictionary to understand some of your vocabulary, haha!
    Very interesting, and detailed as well! Thanks for sharing!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you found it and I hope you enjoy it! Thnak you!
Title: Chapter 1 27 Jan 2011 12:37 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Your story grabbed me from the start and I'm completely hooked.

    Author's Response: Oh, cool! Glad you found it and hope you enjoy the rest of it!
Title: Chapter 1 16 May 2010 6:41 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start.. I look forward to reading more.

    One note: I think you mean captors instead of captives in "His wand, mercifully ignored in his captives' eagerness ..."

    On to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Eeks! I have read, and read, and read, and... well you get the point, but I have read and re-read these chapters, trying to sort out the mistakes and NEVER gave that one a second glance! I thank you so much for catching it. I don't have a beta, but perhaps I should. Anyhoo, thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 01 Nov 2009 7:32 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, wonderfully written! It grabbed my attention--the only thing that kept me from completely immersed, is when I read 'Voldemort giggled darkly' *snicker*.

    Giggle makes me think girly, so I grinned when I read it, ^_^ Maybe chuckled?

    Anyway, it was brilliant and I'm off to read more! Wonderful cliffhanger!

    Author's Response: I'm glad to have gotten a snicker at LV's giggle! Thanks so much for the kind words!
Title: Chapter 1 31 Oct 2009 5:17 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmmm...good start.

    Author's Response: I hope you continue reading! Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 31 Oct 2009 3:32 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Very good.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 31 Oct 2009 2:30 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, you are a very talented writer. That was very intense,but very well written.

    I hope that we see more stories from you.

    Author's Response: What a nice thing to say! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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