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Title: Chapter 10 27 Nov 2023 5:25 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry and Snape feel so close to something good, if only they could be brave enough to acknowledge it. I hope Billy isn’t a death eater in disguise.
Title: Chapter 10 15 Sep 2013 11:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter I like how they are not always on good terms it seems more realistic.

    Author's Response: I think so too.
Title: Chapter 10 04 Jan 2010 3:31 am
Reviewer: Shannon (Tykell9388@yahoo.com) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I actually screamed when I realized that this was the last chapter! I read all 12 in a row cuz I couldn't just stop....it was GREAT. Excellent job! If I knew you I would give you a hug for such an awesome read and prolly make you cocoa! Or brunch (That's all I can make really O.o; 'Less it comes from a box....) I love the characterizations of everyone but especially Snape (fangirl scream) and Hermione's interactions with Snape and her noticing all the parental stuff was just goo-inspiring. I love u now:)

    Author's Response: LOL! I can totally feel the love! Thanks so much for the enthusiastic review! It couldn't have come at a better time either. I thought I had the story written, but the characters keep throwing me curve balls, so I'm having to reconsider the direction of the second half. This conversation between Snape and Dumbledore has to be spot on in order for the rest of the story to fall into place, so I've been pretty brutal with myself. This writing thing, for me, ain't easy, so I hope you'll stick with me until I can get the next chapter posted. Thanks again for the review and the lurve!!!
Title: Chapter 10 19 Nov 2009 10:48 pm
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You've done a really good job so far. You're fic and plotline is very enjoyable and interesting. Well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Chapter 10 14 Nov 2009 2:52 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a great, entertaining story. Very IC.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Title: Chapter 10 13 Nov 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: Wyrsa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Then, without preamble he flicked his wand, removing the invisible barrier;"
    HA, wicked!
    Sweet, thrilling, and awsomly funny chapter! can't wait to see the next. What is it Headmaster whants from them?

    Author's Response: You didn't really think Snape was going to let Harry get away with teasing him, did you?;) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. What does the headmaster want? I'm working on it, really hard, so I hope you stay tuned!
Title: Chapter 10 12 Nov 2009 8:31 pm
Reviewer: fran (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved the bit about Snape and Fang knocking him down

    Harry and Snape's relationship is really cute in this

    can't wait to read the next chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind review!
Title: Chapter 10 12 Nov 2009 7:17 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I wanted more!!!

    Oh oh, what does Dumbledore want? :O

    Great story. I can't wait till you update. I loved when Aberforth made the comment about Fathers and sons. Too funny!

    Author's Response: The chapter, if I had left it the way I had planned it, would have been soooo long, so I broke it up. I promise, I wasn't trying to be a tease! Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Chapter 10 12 Nov 2009 5:42 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    yea a update....i really like this story

    Author's Response: Aw, thanks!

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