Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 16 May 2010 6:41 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start.. I look forward to reading more.

    One note: I think you mean captors instead of captives in "His wand, mercifully ignored in his captives' eagerness ..."

    On to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Eeks! I have read, and read, and read, and... well you get the point, but I have read and re-read these chapters, trying to sort out the mistakes and NEVER gave that one a second glance! I thank you so much for catching it. I don't have a beta, but perhaps I should. Anyhoo, thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 7 17 Apr 2010 1:23 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    So much angst in him..

    Author's Response:

    Yeah... poor thing.

Title: Chapter 14 16 Apr 2010 7:57 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is strong again. I love the swiftness of magical healing!

    Author's Response: LOL! Ain't it great! I truly appreciate your reviews.
Title: Chapter 13 16 Apr 2010 7:46 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Pomfrey leaves a patient? Hard to believe..

    Author's Response: Well, Snape and Harry have to be left to their own devices and they can't become close with a third party in the mix.
Title: Chapter 12 16 Apr 2010 7:38 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting dialog!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 11 16 Apr 2010 7:30 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Powers, powers... Hmmmmmm... Thinking... Yes, makes more sense than love.

    Author's Response: Perhaps, but don't rule out love just yet...
Title: Chapter 2 16 Apr 2010 7:19 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Did you make up Fwooper or is it JKR's? I love the bird :-)

    Author's Response: I did not make up the Fwooper. It's all JKR's! The HP lexicon has been a tremendous resource for me...
Title: Chapter 13 24 Jan 2010 7:39 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    i like it. You get a ten out of ten from me. But I'm beat, so I'll read the rest adn leave a better review later. NIGHT!!

    Author's Response: Giving me a ten out of ten is the best kind of review! Thank you!
Title: Chapter 10 04 Jan 2010 3:31 am
Reviewer: Shannon (Tykell9388@yahoo.com) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I actually screamed when I realized that this was the last chapter! I read all 12 in a row cuz I couldn't just stop....it was GREAT. Excellent job! If I knew you I would give you a hug for such an awesome read and prolly make you cocoa! Or brunch (That's all I can make really O.o; 'Less it comes from a box....) I love the characterizations of everyone but especially Snape (fangirl scream) and Hermione's interactions with Snape and her noticing all the parental stuff was just goo-inspiring. I love u now:)

    Author's Response: LOL! I can totally feel the love! Thanks so much for the enthusiastic review! It couldn't have come at a better time either. I thought I had the story written, but the characters keep throwing me curve balls, so I'm having to reconsider the direction of the second half. This conversation between Snape and Dumbledore has to be spot on in order for the rest of the story to fall into place, so I've been pretty brutal with myself. This writing thing, for me, ain't easy, so I hope you'll stick with me until I can get the next chapter posted. Thanks again for the review and the lurve!!!
Title: Chapter 10 19 Nov 2009 10:48 pm
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You've done a really good job so far. You're fic and plotline is very enjoyable and interesting. Well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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