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Reviews For What's Owed
Author's Response: I thank you for reading... Dumbledore is a character I'm still trying to flesh out for this story, but if you kept reading, there is an explanation, or at least Harry's understanding, of why Dumbledore said what he did. I hope you keep reading, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
HA, wicked! Sweet, thrilling, and awsomly funny chapter! can't wait to see the next. What is it Headmaster whants from them? Author's Response: You didn't really think Snape was going to let Harry get away with teasing him, did you?;) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. What does the headmaster want? I'm working on it, really hard, so I hope you stay tuned!
Harry and Snape's relationship is really cute in this can't wait to read the next chapter Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind review!
Oh oh, what does Dumbledore want? :O Great story. I can't wait till you update. I loved when Aberforth made the comment about Fathers and sons. Too funny! Author's Response: The chapter, if I had left it the way I had planned it, would have been soooo long, so I broke it up. I promise, I wasn't trying to be a tease! Thanks so much for the review!
I can't stop reading!! I will give you a better review tomorrow, but it's late and I have to get up early for work. I had to let you know though how impressed I am with this story! Author's Response: 'I will give you a better review tomorrow.' Nothing could be better than you saying you love the story! And if you feel like crying, cry!!!!! I hope to make readers giggle a bit, but I definitely want them to feel the characters' pain! Cry, please! It means I'm doing something right!;)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I hope you keep reading.
Love how in his semi-consciousness, Harry called Snape "Dad." Probably surprised everyone! And I was extremely worried when Lucius showed up again! Agh! And Draco's reactions to everything was interesting...Is he a victim too, in your story? And Severus's reaction to Lily's coin makes me wonder if he had anything to do with her having it in the first place...Did he give it to her, or something? That would be interesting! Okay, I need to stop. As I said already, I am VERY interested to know where this is going. Keep up the good work! Thank you for writing such LONG chapters, too! Author's Response: Please excuse the errors; I don't have a beta, but I appreciate the constructive criticism. I'm glad you're so curious about everything. It tells me that I'm doing something right... Um, as much as I would love to give you the dirt on Lucius, Draco, and Lily's coin, I'm gonnna have to stay mum on those topics. My evil plan is to keep you VERY interested! I'm glad you're enjoying the long chapters, because believe me, they could be longer. I'm having to be ruthless when I edit, but hopefully it doesn't show too badly. Thank so, so much for the thoughtful review! |
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