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Reviews For Bloody Mary
Title: Day Before Halloween 24 Nov 2009 5:54 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That's a really sweet idea! I love it when the wizards go and do Muggle traditions. It's such fun!
Title: Day Before Halloween 01 Nov 2009 5:30 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    ^_^ Cute begining! There were a few mistakes, in the begining you spelt amusement wrong. Commas were needed in a few places, and here 'Hermione beamed. “Yeah! And maybe he’dlet you guys come too!”' there is a space needed between he'd and let. You might consider getting a beta. Everyone can use another pair of eyes to catch mistakes we miss! :)

    Nice story so far!

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