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Title: Chapter 5 04 Feb 2010 7:52 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh I like! I love stories with these 3 and cannot wait to read more! the chapters are a great length too. Im left wondering just how Harrys' arm healed, cant wait to see where you go with it :D
Title: Chapter 5 26 Jan 2010 4:15 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry slipped there, didn't he? I'm glad that Draco has noticed what's going on, and hope that he'll tell Severus too. Harry really needs help to heal from this desire to hurt himself, though it is very understandable, considering how much he has suffered and the horrible grief he feels now.

    Severus and Draco are wonderful! You do such a great job showing their thoughts and keeping in-character, but redeemable.

    Author's Response: Poor Harry is having a really hard time! Things will start to get better soon, though, and some action is coming up in the next few chapters. Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts, I hope I am able to keep your interest!
Title: Chapter 5 24 Jan 2010 6:04 am
Reviewer: ceara (Signed) [Report This]
    wow what a story. I must confess I cried with the news of the Wesleys. Poor Harry

    Author's Response: Things have to get worse before they can get better. :) Soon, though, Harry will get a break. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 5 15 Jan 2010 8:10 am
Reviewer: gowvan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    really well done.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 5 12 Jan 2010 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent dialogue between the boys and with Severus thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 5 12 Jan 2010 8:01 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like the way draco is varing for harry, I love the compassion in his tone of voice.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 5 12 Jan 2010 1:38 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! What's going on with Harry. He can heal himself, how interesting!

    I wonder how Harry's going to answer Draco's question though; I think that Harry is on the spot now. I'm sure that Snape is going to figure it all out.

    Poor Harry. I want to just hug him, and Snape too. (I ALWAYS want to hug Snape!)

    Please update soon! Great emotional chapter.

    Author's Response: Poor Harry doesn't even realize he's healing himself...but now he's really put on the spot! I'm not too sure he'll be able to talk his way out of this one, the question is--what will Draco do with the information? I always want to hug them too. :D Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 5 11 Jan 2010 11:39 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job! I like what you've done. :-D

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I changed as much of the 'he's as I could...I need a wider vocabulary. :)


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