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Reviews For Longing to Belong
Title: Chapter 7 12 Mar 2010 2:17 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I'm so glad that you've updated.

    I can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder what there plan is.

    I hope that Severus can hold on for awhile. Great chappie as usual. I want more! LOL!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter right now, so hopefully it'll be up by the end of the weekend!
Title: Chapter 6 01 Mar 2010 1:27 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, no, what a cliffhanger! I hope Severus is all right. That was great, in a suspenseful mysterious way having Dumbledore be an imposter. Thank goodness that Severus and Harry knew DD well enough to know that something was off.

    And I love the interaction earlier with Harry and Draco, and how Draco is changing. Great writing!

    I'm really eager for more!

    Author's Response:

    I was really nervous about doing that....DD's hard to manipulate in that respect, he's not one to be easily taken down, but I'm glad I decided to go this route, it makes the rest of the story fall into place that much easier.

     Draco will have his setbacks occassionally and fall back into the "prat-titude" of the past, but I think he's doing well at becoming a good guy.

     

    Thank you!

Title: Chapter 6 19 Feb 2010 7:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you for contiuing with the story. Harry will want to rush back let's hope Draco will contain him!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 6 19 Feb 2010 10:37 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, nice cliffy there, and wonderfully action-filled chapter too ^-^. Poor Harry, he'd having a bit of a rough time isnt he? Although I'm glad Draco's seeing him more as a human being than a weapon now, you did that well (especially considering that the only way Draco would express it is by saying Harry's nuts ^-^)
    Cant wait for more ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I've had a hard time transitioning Draco from prat to pal, and it's not over yet. Harry is having a really tough time, but what doesn't kill him will only make him stronger. :) 
Title: Chapter 6 16 Feb 2010 2:43 am
Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love a gray Harry who's willing to stand up for stuff. I hope they rescue Sevvy!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The rescue attempt should be coming up within the next few chapters!
Title: Chapter 6 16 Feb 2010 1:00 am
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    omg its got to be malfoy!!!! next chappie please! dont leave me in suspence too long!

    Author's Response: Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 6 15 Feb 2010 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, you are evil--leaving that type of a cliffie for us to hold on to.

    Good chapter! Now, is Harry going to have a fit when Sev doesn't appear PDQ?

    And Just HOW did someone manage to overpower/replace the headmaster? Hmm? and who else was in the office, hiding, to send that last curse?

    Looking forward to your next update!
    V.

    Author's Response: Clearly it had to be a surprise attack, to catch Dumbledore off guard. :) Answers coming soon!! Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 6 15 Feb 2010 11:19 am
Reviewer: teddybear (Signed) [Report This]
    WHAT HAPPENED??? This is not good. At least Harry and Severus caught on that it was not the headmaster but still. And Severus getting hit with a curse?? Can't wait til the next chapter is posted.

    Author's Response: Poor Severus never saw it coming! There is definitely trouble ahead, but I'm sure they can handle it. :) Thank you!
Title: Chapter 6 15 Feb 2010 9:11 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Definitely worth waiting for! I think the boys won't listen and come back and try to help sev. It will bring them back togehter. Who is impersonating Albus, can't wait to read the next chapter. please post soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and responding! The boys will definitely be on edge and we all know Harry is prone to rash decisions when he's on edge. :) Hopefully the next chapter will be up very soon.
Title: Chapter 6 15 Feb 2010 6:51 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow cool! Great chapter.

    Just so you know, "Chapter 6" shows up twice in the beginning of the chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Oops! I'll have to edit that out. Thanks!


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