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Title: Chapter 6 15 Feb 2010 2:30 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    aw man, I was like uh oh. and all into it and then bam over. haha. I probably haven't reviewed before so I shall say I find this story interesting, I am always waiting to see what will happen next. and as for next my guess is the boys will contact someone. They aren't unknowledgeable as they seem. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! They have the capacity to be quite intelligent when needed. :) But they both exhibit tendencies to react before thinking, so that may be a mark against them. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

    Author's Response: Thank you! They have the capacity to be quite intelligent when needed. :) But they both exhibit tendencies to react before thinking, so that may be a mark against them. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 6 15 Feb 2010 2:28 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    ugh, sorry, I meant to do it yesterday when I could finally sit down and read and give it the attention it deserves, but other things came up. So sorry. Anyways, I thought that this chapter was good.
Title: Chapter 6 15 Feb 2010 2:28 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    ugh, sorry, I meant to do it yesterday when I could finally sit down and read and give it the attention it deserves, but other things came up. So sorry. Anyways, I thought that this chapter was good.

    Author's Response: No problem...I'm on an extended break from work for Mardi Gras and I will have no computer access until late in the week, so I decided to just throw it out there. Sorry!
Title: Chapter 6 15 Feb 2010 2:03 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, eeeeeeeek!!!! Everything has to be ok! Nobody else can die!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: No intentions of killing Severus! Maybe roughing him up a bit, but that remains to be seen. :) Thank you!

    Author's Response: No intentions of killing Severus! Maybe roughing him up a bit, but that remains to be seen. :) Thank you!
Title: Chapter 6 15 Feb 2010 12:38 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh what a happening chapter at the end there! who is pretending to be Dumbledore?? I simply must know lol. I dread to think what kind of impulsivness the boys may try if Severus doesnt come right away, hopefully it would work and they would all get out in one piece! :D cant wait for updates :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I hope to have an update soon....they sure will be ansty waiting for him to come back and I don't know if they'll be able to contain themselves to do nothing. We'll find out very soon who is pretending to be Dumbledore, and maybe he'll get what's coming to him too. :)

Title: Chapter 6 14 Feb 2010 11:36 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!! I hope that Severus is going to be okay.

    I think that Harry will want to come back for Snape, knowing him.

    Great chappie, but I can't wait for the next update. I can't stand the suspense.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'll make sure the next update comes quickly!
Title: Chapter 5 04 Feb 2010 7:52 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh I like! I love stories with these 3 and cannot wait to read more! the chapters are a great length too. Im left wondering just how Harrys' arm healed, cant wait to see where you go with it :D
Title: Chapter 5 26 Jan 2010 4:15 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry slipped there, didn't he? I'm glad that Draco has noticed what's going on, and hope that he'll tell Severus too. Harry really needs help to heal from this desire to hurt himself, though it is very understandable, considering how much he has suffered and the horrible grief he feels now.

    Severus and Draco are wonderful! You do such a great job showing their thoughts and keeping in-character, but redeemable.

    Author's Response: Poor Harry is having a really hard time! Things will start to get better soon, though, and some action is coming up in the next few chapters. Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts, I hope I am able to keep your interest!
Title: Chapter 4 26 Jan 2010 4:06 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    A lovely chapter again! The emotions are so real and powerful and heart-breaking. You've done an awesome job of getting into Draco's head and showing how he is coming to care for Harry, though he wants to deny it to himself. I loved how confused he was, so unused to strong emotions, to displaying them anyway, and he wondered how Gryffindors stood it.

    Poor Harry. I was really hoping that the Weasleys' deaths might be some kind of mistake or ploy for the war, but it doesn't seem so. Severus' idea is a good one, that to keep Harry busy, involved in things and making him feel better prepared might help. It would certainly be better than not doing anything for him.

    Poor Theodore Nott, too. It would be very difficult for Draco to have to witness his room-mates' murder, and it shows how depraved the DEs really are, that a father could kill his own son.

    Great chapter, though very sad! I just want to hug them all, especially Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! It's quite hard to get into Draco's head--I want him to move forward a lot faster than should be expected, so I have to really watch what I have him say and do at any given point in time, as well as make sure readers know it's not an instant transformation and that it's just as hard for him to believe as it would be anyone who's familiar with him.

     

    I'm sure Harry wouldn't mind if you gave him a squeeze. :)

     

    Thank you very much!

Title: Chapter 4 26 Jan 2010 4:06 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    A lovely chapter again! The emotions are so real and powerful and heart-breaking. You've done an awesome job of getting into Draco's head and showing how he is coming to care for Harry, though he wants to deny it to himself. I loved how confused he was, so unused to strong emotions, to displaying them anyway, and he wondered how Gryffindors stood it.

    Poor Harry. I was really hoping that the Weasleys' deaths might be some kind of mistake or ploy for the war, but it doesn't seem so. Severus' idea is a good one, that to keep Harry busy, involved in things and making him feel better prepared might help. It would certainly be better than not doing anything for him.

    Poor Theodore Nott, too. It would be very difficult for Draco to have to witness his room-mates' murder, and it shows how depraved the DEs really are, that a father could kill his own son.

    Great chapter, though very sad! I just want to hug them all, especially Harry.

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