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Reviews For Longing to Belong
But it is good to see Draco showing some concern for Harry, and that Severus tried to comfort him. Very well-written, but oh, I just can't bear that the Weasleys have died; poor Harry! Author's Response: I know, I love the Weasleys too! I hated that I had to get rid of them, but it'll be important for the plot in further chapters. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm honored that a writer of your caliber is reading my fic!
Author's Response: Things have to get worse before they can get better. :) Soon, though, Harry will get a break. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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I wonder how Harry's going to answer Draco's question though; I think that Harry is on the spot now. I'm sure that Snape is going to figure it all out. Poor Harry. I want to just hug him, and Snape too. (I ALWAYS want to hug Snape!) Please update soon! Great emotional chapter. Author's Response: Poor Harry doesn't even realize he's healing himself...but now he's really put on the spot! I'm not too sure he'll be able to talk his way out of this one, the question is--what will Draco do with the information? I always want to hug them too. :D Thank you!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I changed as much of the 'he's as I could...I need a wider vocabulary. :)
Draco's going through some interesting personality changes isnt he? I like how you pointed out the effort the increase in emotions is likely to take out of him ^-^ And how Sev doesnt seem to realise he cares ^^ I wonder how long it will take them both to discover Harry's secret and how much the care... oh the mystery ^-^ Makes sense that Harry would do something reckless, if I lost so many people close to me and was able to blame myself (no matter how wrong I was) I dont know what I'd do. Cant wait to read more, and hope your Christmas trip goes well ^^ Author's Response: Thank you! Lol, I know what you mean about being glad and it sounding awful...I'm a big angst fan, obviously.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm going with my family to Disney World...I'm really hoping to get the next chapter posted before we leave, but it's iffy. If not, I'll have it up shortly past Christmas!
At this point I wouldn't be surprised if Harry's cuts went TOO far someday soon. And what is with Albus? Why doesn't he seem more concerned with Harry or the loss of the Weasleys? Author's Response: Albus is being a tool right now, but the reasoning why he's acting like he is will come to light within the next few chapters. Harry certainly has a long road ahead of him, though. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! |
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