Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Longing to Belong
Title: Chapter 3 26 Jan 2010 3:57 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, no! Not the Weasleys! I love them!

    But it is good to see Draco showing some concern for Harry, and that Severus tried to comfort him.

    Very well-written, but oh, I just can't bear that the Weasleys have died; poor Harry!

    Author's Response: I know, I love the Weasleys too! I hated that I had to get rid of them, but it'll be important for the plot in further chapters. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm honored that a writer of your caliber is reading my fic!
Title: Chapter 5 24 Jan 2010 6:04 am
Reviewer: ceara (Signed) [Report This]
    wow what a story. I must confess I cried with the news of the Wesleys. Poor Harry

    Author's Response: Things have to get worse before they can get better. :) Soon, though, Harry will get a break. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 5 15 Jan 2010 8:10 am
Reviewer: gowvan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    really well done.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 5 12 Jan 2010 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent dialogue between the boys and with Severus thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 5 12 Jan 2010 8:01 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like the way draco is varing for harry, I love the compassion in his tone of voice.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 5 12 Jan 2010 1:38 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! What's going on with Harry. He can heal himself, how interesting!

    I wonder how Harry's going to answer Draco's question though; I think that Harry is on the spot now. I'm sure that Snape is going to figure it all out.

    Poor Harry. I want to just hug him, and Snape too. (I ALWAYS want to hug Snape!)

    Please update soon! Great emotional chapter.

    Author's Response: Poor Harry doesn't even realize he's healing himself...but now he's really put on the spot! I'm not too sure he'll be able to talk his way out of this one, the question is--what will Draco do with the information? I always want to hug them too. :D Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 5 11 Jan 2010 11:39 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job! I like what you've done. :-D

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I changed as much of the 'he's as I could...I need a wider vocabulary. :)

Title: Chapter 4 21 Dec 2009 10:06 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter, and I love the way you wrote Harry's coping mechanism too, I didnt know this fic would go in that direction but I'm very glad it did (as awful as that sounds, sorry ^^). Very very well-written.
    Draco's going through some interesting personality changes isnt he? I like how you pointed out the effort the increase in emotions is likely to take out of him ^-^ And how Sev doesnt seem to realise he cares ^^ I wonder how long it will take them both to discover Harry's secret and how much the care... oh the mystery ^-^
    Makes sense that Harry would do something reckless, if I lost so many people close to me and was able to blame myself (no matter how wrong I was) I dont know what I'd do. Cant wait to read more, and hope your Christmas trip goes well ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you! Lol, I know what you mean about being glad and it sounding awful...I'm a big angst fan, obviously.
Title: Chapter 4 17 Dec 2009 5:48 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good angst here I love it thank you for updating I hope ypu have a wonderful Christmas where ever you will be

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm going with my family to Disney World...I'm really hoping to get the next chapter posted before we leave, but it's iffy. If not, I'll have it up shortly past Christmas!
Title: Chapter 4 17 Dec 2009 7:49 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    And now he's cutting.
    At this point I wouldn't be surprised if Harry's cuts went TOO far someday soon.
    And what is with Albus? Why doesn't he seem more concerned with Harry or the loss of the Weasleys?

    Author's Response: Albus is being a tool right now, but the reasoning why he's acting like he is will come to light within the next few chapters. Harry certainly has a long road ahead of him, though. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5