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Reviews For Longing to Belong
Title: Chapter 4 17 Dec 2009 3:29 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    I know I've already read this, but I wanted to review anyways. GREAT JOB once again! I loved the little parts that you added, it made it so much clearer! I just knew Harry had been cutting himself! I look foward to betaing your next chapter. Please send it the moment you get it done. :-D

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the additions I made--thank you again so much for all of your help, I tend to have logic and thought processes that differ from the general population and therefore are much harder to follow. lol. :) I will send it along as soon as I'm done!
Title: Chapter 4 17 Dec 2009 2:19 am
Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry no! Aghhh... great chapter! You leave me begging for more, and while I dislike suspense in general, it's very well written!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 3 16 Dec 2009 3:03 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't nelieve that Dumbledore acted ad if nothing had happened when Severus contacted him and why wasn't he at the burrow as it had only just happened! Love the idea of this story and the interaction between the boys

    Author's Response:

    Dumbledore will come to light within the next few chapters, rest assured. :) Thank you!

Title: Chapter 3 06 Dec 2009 3:18 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Gosh, you're cruel to kill all those Weasleys!!! Poor Harry!!!
    And by the way - I didn't understand the headmaster's actions either!!! How the hell could he sit in his office with twinkling eyes after those events? They were both members of the order and students of his after all!!!! What a bastard!
    Now, let something go right for Harry - I don't think any child could bear even more grief and suffering!

    Author's Response: Lol! "What a bastard!" That made me smile. There's a definite reason that he's being such a bastard, and things aren't exactly as they appear to be. Harry will have some happy moments soon--I won't torture the poor kid that much without some sort of respite! Thanks for reading, I hope you continue to do so!
Title: Chapter 3 05 Dec 2009 7:55 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter but I feel something is off in the scene between Dumbledore and Harry regarding the Weasleys' death. Severus is right,Dumbledore would not be sitting calmly in his office if the Weasley's had been killed. Nope the whole thing does not feel right.

    Great momemts between Draco and Harry.

    Author's Response: There's a reason for that. It'll be explained later. :) When something feels off, it's usually because something is. Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 05 Dec 2009 9:04 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Saddest thing ever but with a hug at the end; I have no idea how to feel about that 'cept: AWESOME CHAPTER!!!
    Cant wait to read more as always, this fic is really growing on me fast... like a good kind of fungus ^^
    nice job ^-^ (btw, I like how your Draco is taking a shine to Harry too, although how he can think it would be good to fall under Harry's 'protection' when Harry's going through enough to make any sane human being want to off himself is a bit beyond me ^^)

    Author's Response: Well when you switch sides of a battle, it's always good to befriend the person who's strongest for the cause, and since Harry's the chosen one...lol...in a round-about way it makes sense. More to come on that later, though! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3 04 Dec 2009 4:11 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brilliant chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much!!

Title: Chapter 3 04 Dec 2009 12:30 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Jesus
    You killed the WEASLEYS?!?!?!?
    Not just one or two but SIX?
    WTF?
    Are you trying to make sure Harry suicides?

    Author's Response: I love the Weasleys...all of them! It was something that had to be done, though. I hope you continue to read anyway!
Title: Chapter 3 04 Dec 2009 8:18 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was great, but i can't believe ron's family is gone. I feel so bad for harry. post soon please!

    Author's Response: It was really hard to write, as was the next chapter. But it was something I had to do. :( Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 04 Dec 2009 5:29 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    this is just too sad. poor harry going through so much and losing a family again.

    Author's Response: Hopefully by story's end he will have gained another. :) Thanks for reading!

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