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Reviews For Longing to Belong
Title: Chapter 3 04 Dec 2009 3:30 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nooooooooo!!!! Not the Weasleys!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: I was really upset about doing it, but it was a necessary evil. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3 04 Dec 2009 3:25 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah, poor Harry, that's terrible! I'll be highly surprised if he doesn't hurt and also attempt to off himself. Please update soon, this is a great story.

    Author's Response: Thanks! It will definitely be a catalyst that drives Harry to the edge--I love a tormented Harry!--but it was necessary.
Title: Chapter 3 04 Dec 2009 3:17 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! That's so horrible. But I'm really pleased that Severus is there for Hrry, and willing to comfort Harry. I really like how realistic this sotry is going, and I don't usually like Draco and Harry and Snape stories, and there are only a handful that I'll read, but I'm really loving this one, and actually hoping that they can become a family of sorts. I very rarely want that.

    Good job, and I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad I am able to keep your interest even if it isn't your preferred story type!! I'm trying not  to jump into a caring relationship like I've seen happen many, many times and there will be steps taken both forward and backwards, in hopes of keeping it realistic. :) Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 2 24 Nov 2009 3:14 am
Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like how you have combined the standard, recognizable plot elements with a new storyline. I look forward to reading more!
Title: Chapter 2 17 Nov 2009 9:24 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it, I can picture them up in a tree waiting for.... Can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
Title: Chapter 2 16 Nov 2009 8:05 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more
Title: Chapter 2 16 Nov 2009 7:37 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Oh!! I think that Harry and Draco are in big trouble, with a capital "T"!!!

    I can't wait for the next chapter.I'm glad that Draco and Harry are getting along though.
Title: Chapter 1 15 Nov 2009 5:22 am
Reviewer: CrazyDragon (Signed) [Report This]
    ::snorts:: That's a ba-a-ad eavesdropping habit those boys have...maybe Severus should train 'em up to spy? After introducing them to the concept of *subtlety,* that is. I can't wait to see how Severus attempts to break them of that habit! (Note, I said "attempt". I don't know if even Voldemort could succeed!)

    Heh. That was some good teenage angst!

    Author's Response: Lol, that was the most entertaining review I've ever read. Thank you. I don't think they'll ever master enough subtlety to spy, even if they worked on it 24/7--he will try to break the habit, but he's got a looong way to go.
Title: Chapter 1 10 Nov 2009 9:39 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    i really like where this story is going. love how it was written and im a HUGE sucker for angsty fics so this one is one for my faves!!! cant wait til the next chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm a sucker for angst as well, so plan on having quite a bit within this story! Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Nov 2009 4:43 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this is your first story? I'm very impressed, and really anxious to see where this story is going. Nice work.

    I love how Severus is concerned, but not overly so, over Harry. You really handled Harry and Snape's emotions so well, and I loved the way Harry finally opened up to Severus.

    I'm also anxious to see where Draco fits into it all.

    I look forward to your next update.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I was hoping it was in character enough, and it seems to be. What a relief! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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