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Reviews For The Biggest Mistake of Them All?
What a perfect child potter. Trying to guess his age here... 4? Anyway, the reactions are right on. K
I liked the way you portrayed Harry, all silent and scuttling; the poor kid must have been scared out of his wits. The library scene was great, I love the image of a frustrated Snape shoving Harry in front of a book. The humour in this story is wonderful, Snape's sarcasm is great. Lines like "Was he really so low down in the hierarchy that Prince Potter could not even bring himself to speak to him?" are just so Snape and so funny. But the imaginary boggart is the best bit, that's just so funny! I love that he checked Dumbledore wasn't around before looking under the bed. But oh boy is he not going to be happy when he wakes up! Awesome! I really enjoyed this fic, it was heaps of fun and made me grin like an idiot :) Thanks for writing!
Harry seems very sweet and scared. It must be terrifying to be placed with someone he doesn't know and isn't exactly friendly. Great story! Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it immensely. I would love to see that too, Snape will probably need to be taken straight to St.Mungos but even then he will get discharged (eventually!) and won't be allowed to shirk his duty, hehe the joys of torturing Snape in such cute ways. I love little Harry in fanfiction, he just seems so vulnerable compared to the teenager who stood up to Voldemort. A lot of my stories seem to have a small Harry in, just because I love reading/writing him! Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I am so glad you liked it! A lot of thanks needs to go to Gracie; she made it readable!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I couldn't imagine Severus and Harry snuggling up like that when Sev was conscious! I can just imagine his expression when he wakes up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Poor Snape indeedy, he gets manipulated into doing everything! He should soon find out that this job is not as bad as he imagines though!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Yep, he definitely is! Oh, that just reminded me of Bil's fest entry; 'Menagerie', off I go into giggles again!
Great one! Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Everyone has been so kind about this story and so I think I will get round to a sequel, things are hectic (to the exteme) at the minute though so I don't think it will be for a while *sighs*. Thanks so much again, I appreciate it immensely! |
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