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Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 09 Dec 2009 1:51 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, great story! I loved it. Everyone was so in-character, and Severus is wonderful.
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 06 Dec 2009 9:02 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Snicker.

    What a perfect child potter. Trying to guess his age here... 4? Anyway, the reactions are right on.

    K
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 06 Dec 2009 4:14 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol! That was great! I loved the conversation between Snape and Dumbledore at the start, there are some great lines there, especially the "Ah, it’s *my* fault. So sorry, I hadn’t realised." :) Poor Snape, being railroaded into everything. But in this case it's all for his own good, since having Harry around will be good for him.

    I liked the way you portrayed Harry, all silent and scuttling; the poor kid must have been scared out of his wits. The library scene was great, I love the image of a frustrated Snape shoving Harry in front of a book.

    The humour in this story is wonderful, Snape's sarcasm is great. Lines like "Was he really so low down in the hierarchy that Prince Potter could not even bring himself to speak to him?" are just so Snape and so funny. But the imaginary boggart is the best bit, that's just so funny! I love that he checked Dumbledore wasn't around before looking under the bed. But oh boy is he not going to be happy when he wakes up! Awesome!

    I really enjoyed this fic, it was heaps of fun and made me grin like an idiot :) Thanks for writing!
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 05 Dec 2009 10:21 am
Reviewer: bugeyedmonster2 (Signed) [Report This]
    If you ever get the chance to do more in this universe, I'll read it. I always wanted to see Harry taken away from the Dursleys.
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 30 Nov 2009 2:47 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    I'd love to be a fly on the wall when Dumbledore tells Snape that the one-week stay is going to be a life time one. :)

    Harry seems very sweet and scared. It must be terrifying to be placed with someone he doesn't know and isn't exactly friendly.

    Great story!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it immensely. I would love to see that too, Snape will probably need to be taken straight to St.Mungos but even then he will get discharged (eventually!) and won't be allowed to shirk his duty, hehe the joys of torturing Snape in such cute ways. I love little Harry in fanfiction, he just seems so vulnerable compared to the teenager who stood up to Voldemort. A lot of my stories seem to have a small Harry in, just because I love reading/writing him! Thanks again!
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 24 Nov 2009 4:17 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sweet. I loved the ending the most. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I am so glad you liked it! A lot of thanks needs to go to Gracie; she made it readable!
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 22 Nov 2009 7:05 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story!!! I love how Severus feel asleep before Harry! Dumbly can sure jump to conclusions....

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I couldn't imagine Severus and Harry snuggling up like that when Sev was conscious! I can just imagine his expression when he wakes up!
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 22 Nov 2009 4:53 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Snape. They always get him right where they want him in the end. :-P

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Poor Snape indeedy, he gets manipulated into doing everything! He should soon find out that this job is not as bad as he imagines though!
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 22 Nov 2009 1:33 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oops. Severus is going to have a duck.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review! Yep, he definitely is! Oh, that just reminded me of Bil's fest entry; 'Menagerie', off I go into giggles again!

Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 18 Nov 2009 8:04 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was rather sweet. If you ever felt the urge, I would really like to see you do more with this story, continue it perhaps??

    Great one!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Everyone has been so kind about this story and so I think I will get round to a sequel, things are hectic (to the exteme) at the minute though so I don't think it will be for a while *sighs*. Thanks so much again, I appreciate it immensely!

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