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Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 16 Aug 2022 8:11 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m totally hooked.
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 01 May 2012 9:29 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this Sev
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 06 Dec 2009 1:33 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    awww that was so cute, i'm so pleased that lily stood up for what she believes in and stood up to james and his appaling behaviour

    sev and lilys business will be the best potion place in the whole of the wizarding world, no matter what james thinks

    harry did deserve to be punished for what he did, as he and everyone else could of been seriously injured

    Author's Response:

    It will and what does he know anyway?

    Yes and he knows that and he'll never behave that way again.

Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 26 Nov 2009 8:43 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww that was so sweet. Poor Sev, he makes such an adorable father though!

    Author's Response: he sure does. Don't tell him I said that though! :D
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 21 Nov 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter--I really like the explanation behind this universe. It was clear and believeable because it did seem like Lily really wanted to make things work and didn't want to leave James, but in the end, somehow mustered up the strength to do it. You've painted her as a strong lady, but not totally impervious to weaknesses, which I like.

    While I personally dislike reading cp scenes, I think you handled it with finesse and made it sound appropriate to the behavior. Nice job, Snapegirl!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    She did really try and that's why it hurt her so much when she found that James was cheating on her, both the first and second time. It took a lot of courage for her to admit their marriage was a mistake and to then leave  with Harry and even greater courage to start all over again with Severus.

    As for the CP scene, I usually don't like writing them too graphically, but in this case it was necessary to the plotline and I'm glad I didn't turn you off.

Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 20 Nov 2009 7:27 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Some say, men are afraid of smart women. I can easily fit your James into that category! :D And Harry... poor dear; he's adorable, naughty or not. :)

    I truly admire your knack for portraying, ah, typical people. (I don't mean it in a bad way.) To incorporate character traits that are, well, typical - common, if you like - to large masses of people into fictional characters, requires good observation skills, not to mention 'a way with words'. ;) And it's done brilliantly here - I can totally picture the family drama. :)

    Very promising beginning!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much!

    I agree, James could be classed like that and also as a man who doesn't appreciate a woman who likes to work.  Hope you enjoy the family drama that's going to happen very soon.

Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 20 Nov 2009 6:34 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, this reminds me so much of the time when my sisters and I set the curtains on fire in our house. We were alone and playing with a lit stick from our woodburning stove and the curtains next to it caught on fire.

    Luckily we managed to put it out but boy did we get our butts tanned when our dad found out.

    I'd say Harry knows better now, Lily is an awesome wife and James is such an idiot for cheating on her. I'll read more tomorrow! Great start!

    Author's Response: Thanks and that was a great flashback story!
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 19 Nov 2009 9:13 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Lord, but Harry sure is a scamp! I love how you showed Lily's life in two perspectives and how you have both parents agree on punishments and so forth. It shows good teamwork! My husband and I do that. I'm sure Harry won't play with a wand ever again, Sev got his point across without being too harsh.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! No, he won't.
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 19 Nov 2009 7:27 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, Harry is very naughty isn't he?
    I'm glad that he's forgiven though. What a little scamp. I'm curious to see Rosie and Eric.

    Nice start Snapegirl.

    Author's Response: Yes, he is.  You'll meet Rosie and Eric soon. Severus and Lily will always forgive the little scamp!
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 19 Nov 2009 6:05 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww so sweet! I loved the idea that Sev and Lily are apothecaries and Harry is just too cute as well as a real mischief maker. It was a good thing the potion wasn't more volatile, it could have blown up the whole shop. Off to read the next part!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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