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Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 26 Nov 2009 8:50 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I'm glad Lily stuck up for Sev. It would be horrible if they argued over James.

    Author's Response: It would but luckily Lily knows how James can be and won't stand for any nonsense from him. Plus she knew exactly how Severus disciplined Harry and that helped a lot when she defended him to James.  Thanks so much for reviewing all my chapters.
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 21 Nov 2009 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! I love Sev and Lily together so much! I hope James has really been taken care of, but something tells me that he will try and take this to court anyways, though I don't know how he'd win. After all, Harry clearly loves Sev and Lily witnessed the spanking.

    Great chapter!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: james might just try something like that eventually. He probably wouldn't win, not unless he tried to buy off the judge, but Harry would probably have a lot to say about james doing such  nasty things.  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 21 Nov 2009 12:31 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was so cute! And so sad too, poor Harry so confused with his dad saying mean things about his stepfather. And it's also causing doubt with Sev as a parent. James is such an IDIOT! But at least Severus has Lily.

    Author's Response: Thanks and you're right on all counts.
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 20 Nov 2009 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha ha! Deage James and give him a spanking? Severus, you wish! :)

    Author's Response: Yes, he does. It would be poetic justice, LOL!
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 20 Nov 2009 5:04 am
Reviewer: Wooster (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this so far!

    I only ever leave reviews when I have something specific to say...so here goes:

    1. Love the universe you've created. Very clever re-imagining of Grindelwald/Dumbledore/Tom Riddle

    2. I laughed out loud at the "Dinosaurs" reference.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much!

    You got the reference, yay! I was wondering who else would recognize that show, I grew up watching it.

    You'll see more Tom Riddle in future chapters.

Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 19 Nov 2009 9:42 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Such a great bond between Lily and Severus. The whole family is adorable!

    Author's Response: Aww you're sweet!
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 19 Nov 2009 8:40 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Really enjoying this story so much. Question, Harry is about six in this story? I love they way you have written Lily, such a spitfire! Love how Severus loves his family. Great story.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yes Harry is six here.  Yeah she sure is! Severus is a good dad here, if a bit strict. Thanks!
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 19 Nov 2009 7:33 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Rosie and Eric sound adorable, but then, you write little children so well.

    Why do I have a feeling that there is going to be a battle Royale over Harry!

    Author's Response: Oh there is all right! Yeah Sev's kids are really cute!
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 19 Nov 2009 6:22 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how Severus explained things to Harry and the other two little Snapes are adorable! Can't wait to see what happens next in this! It's very imaginative.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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