| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 02 May 2012 11:18 pm
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| Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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Good Dursleys, mmmm.... Bigger surprise than
Goody Voldie
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 22 Feb 2010 9:46 pm
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed)
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i'm not complaining about the dursleys, it makes a nice change to read a fic where they are nice decent human beings.
i like the game of cricket, nice relaxing game to play
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 11 Jan 2010 6:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Loved this chapter! It's really cute and I like the new improved Dursleys. Now Harry and Lily can have a normal family, Muggle and wizard. And Severus too!
Great job!
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 06 Jan 2010 5:10 pm
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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I love the new Dursleys and it's nice to see the two sisters getting along and also all the children (well except for LV and Rosie) and the decision to play both kinds of sports was very smart! Great job the both of you! Update soon!
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 06 Jan 2010 2:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I liked the Dursley's in your story as everything else is AU they should be too! Thank you for updating
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 03 Jan 2010 8:44 am
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| Reviewer: Trimelda (Anonymous)
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Hey girl, you go ahead and publish NICE stories about Harry's life and the Dursleys! I kind of like reading about how things should have been for our favorite young wizard named Harry. Don't mind all those dunderheads who think otherwise.
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 01 Jan 2010 6:48 am
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| Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Good chapter, but I think you might try working on showing instead of telling, and not repeating yourself. For example, you could have left the statement saying that Eric went to peer out the window. The fact that he wanted to be the first to see the Dursleys was implied. Trust yourself as a writer; you can get the message across without needing to explain what every action and gesture means. Well written actions speak for themselves.
I'm not worried about the differences from canon Dursleys, because Lily is alive and perhaps could have made peace with Petunia at some point and with time often comes understanding. Also, in canon, the Dursleys were forced to take Harry in and that could make a huge difference. Hard to say. Great chapter!
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 31 Dec 2009 2:07 pm
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| Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed)
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nice......
Happy 2010!!!!!!!!
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