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Title: The Consequences of Irresponsibility 19 Dec 2009 2:27 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, I liked how the woman Mathilda handled the situation. I hope now James will shape up.

    Author's Response: he'll try and thanks for reading!
Title: The Consequences of Irresponsibility 16 Dec 2009 10:51 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really wish that James could let go of his misplaced jealousy and realize that while Severus has a place in Harry's heart, he hasn't replaced him. If only he could see that it is this very jealousy and overriding need to be better than Severus that is causing much of the problems he is facing. A little maturity can go a long ways. I guess it's probably too much to ask for James to actually LISTEN to the advice that the supervisors will give him.....

    Great chapter!!

    Author's Response: That's true and it will take a bit more coaching before James is willing to listen to good advice and follow it. It's a good thing the social workers are so stubborn, LOL! Eventually he'll start to get a clue. Like a real man I know who did something similar after he was divorced. Thanks for reading!
Title: The Consequences of Irresponsibility 16 Dec 2009 7:41 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Good! Supervised visits are just what James needs! He needs to grow up and take responsibility for his son. So cute how Harry fell asleep in Severus' arms. Thank you for a wonderful chapter!

    Author's Response: Yes he does! You're welcome!
Title: The Consequences of Irresponsibility 16 Dec 2009 2:43 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well i hope james has learnt his lesson but ui seriously doubt it, as james will think he's above the law and will do whatever he wants to without any thought to anyone else and he blatently lies to people who are in charge, authority figures that is

    Author's Response: he does and he does have a major attitude problem regarding Severus. But he will attempt to koderate himself because he doesn't want to miss Harry growing up and all.
Title: Advice From A Healer 16 Dec 2009 2:34 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    does james actually care at all for harry? if it was my child the first thing i would ask is how they were, james didn't even think to do that, james needs to get a reality check, otherwise he will lose what custody he has

    Author's Response: He does love Harry, he just doesn't know how to show it properly.  He, and Sirius, tend to think of Harry as another adult instead of the child that he is.
Title: James' Folly 16 Dec 2009 2:28 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    james may of not meant for the accident to happen but he didn't think anything through properly at all and it was harry who suffered the consenquences for his actions.

    severus had every right to be angry with james and sev did well in keeping his temper

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Poor Harry, but it could have been so much worse!
Title: The Consequences of Irresponsibility 16 Dec 2009 1:56 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I'm glad that they didn't take away James' visitation rights. Maybe they'll teach him how to care for Harry better, and be a more attentive father.

    It's very difficult for children to be caught in the middle of divorce and choosing between parents.

    I'm looking forward to seeing if James will make an effort to be a better father.

    Good chappie Snapegirl.

    Author's Response:

    They'll certainly try to do that. 

    Yes it is and I know because a friend of mine recently went through one, with a similar situation as described in this story, only she didn't have a Sev to lean on and is raising her son mostly by herself.

    He will be trying at least somewhat.

Title: Advice From A Healer 14 Dec 2009 5:51 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes finally James is realizing he's screwed up. It's sad that it takes something like that to make some people wake up to how stupid their behavior is! Good for Andromeda!

    Author's Response: Sometimes things like this are the only things that will get people to wake up and see how stupid their behavior really is.
Title: Advice From A Healer 13 Dec 2009 8:39 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice to see Harry will be okay. James is just such, such, such a git!!!!

    Author's Response: Yes, but hopefully he's starting to see the light.
Title: Advice From A Healer 13 Dec 2009 6:35 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes you have and now you have to pay the piper. I loved how cute Harry was even with his broken arm. And Andromeda was good too. Excellent fic!

    Author's Response: Harry is quite adorable.  Some kids, like Harry, just can't help but be cute all the time.  Andromeda loves Harry just like she loves her own niece and nephew...and she just wants what is best for Harry.  That doesn't involve having to set his broken bones because James wasn't thinking.

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