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Title: James' Folly 08 Dec 2009 10:13 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    very good story. i really like your Au! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: James' Folly 08 Dec 2009 8:26 am
Reviewer: Leilia Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Incredible.

    Oh, poor little Harry. Broken arms are no fun. (I know from experience)

    I loved Lily's line about James not being worth Severus killing. ;-}
    I also loved Severus dressing down James. Personally, I think that he could have used a little bit more chastisement. Stupid idiot.

    On the other hand, this would be the perfect leverage for Sev and Lily to use to revoke James's visitation rights. Especially if Harry lets slip what had happened earlier at breakfast.

    I really love the story, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. ;-}

    Leilia

    Author's Response:

    I know what it's like too. 

    He could have but he wanted to see to Harry first. he was more concerned over his son that beating the snot out James.

    Yes, it would be and there will be a custody hearing again coming up in the next chapter.

    Thanks so much!

Title: James' Folly 08 Dec 2009 4:04 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    James is such an idiot! I hope Lily and Severus do try to get sole custody while James is gone. Accidents are one thing, but purposely putting your own child in danager is totally uncalled for!! Great chapter by the way, just made me mad at James!

    Author's Response: You're right and you should be mad at him. They will be trying to work things out next chapter.
Title: Harry Explodes 06 Dec 2009 11:51 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor Harry! James really needs a kick in the pants and so does Sirius! I really hope nothing bad happens to Harry on the hippogriff.

    Author's Response: He sure does1 Thanks for reading and the next chapter's up!
Title: Harry Explodes 06 Dec 2009 10:03 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have a feeling that Harry will meet with a little accident involving a certain magical creature resulting in a trip to St. Mungo's... maybe... ;)

    Author's Response: Could be and now you can find out what happens as we've just posted again.
Title: Harry Explodes 06 Dec 2009 2:43 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    james must start listening to his son and not act like a toddler, when harry goes home all hell will break out.

    what will happen with buckbeak well harry will fall off and ends up in st mungos with broken limbs as james had harry fly on him on his own

    Author's Response: Yes he should and you're really close to what happens!
Title: The Lupins' Advice 06 Dec 2009 2:35 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i think dora oncve she has all the facts won't hold sev responsible for his fathers actions, what could of sev have of done. i woul;d tell her before she goes of to hogwarts as someone there is bound to know the whole truth.

    don't send harry to james the irressponible

    Author's Response:

    She probably won't it wasn't his fault, but he just feels guilty over it.  Yes, they will tell her before she goes to school.

    Unfortunately he has to go, it's part of the custody agreement.

Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual 06 Dec 2009 2:02 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    remus and cissy that is quite surprising, but they do make a nice couple, lucius and bellatrix are suited for one another and cissy actually did well to be shot of him

    Author's Response: She did and I agree withyou. Just wait till you see what happens between Lucius and Bella in a future chapter.
Title: Chapter 2: James' Reaction 06 Dec 2009 1:39 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    go lily, you tell james how it is you put him in his place, sev is a good stepfather to harry and only doles out punishments when its warranted. James would probably think its a great thing to do pinching someones wand and blowing something up and he would probably pat harry on the head and tell him he did well

    Author's Response: Oh he would! Believe me he would! Lily knows it too which is why she's so angry.
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 06 Dec 2009 1:33 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    awww that was so cute, i'm so pleased that lily stood up for what she believes in and stood up to james and his appaling behaviour

    sev and lilys business will be the best potion place in the whole of the wizarding world, no matter what james thinks

    harry did deserve to be punished for what he did, as he and everyone else could of been seriously injured

    Author's Response:

    It will and what does he know anyway?

    Yes and he knows that and he'll never behave that way again.


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