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Title: Harry Explodes 05 Dec 2009 9:54 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    -mystically- I see with my inner-eye an accident about to happen. Stupid James is going to get Harry hurt and will bring down upon the wrath of Lily and Severus. He will deserve it! I do hope that in time James will see that the way to his son's heart isn't through gifts and being lenient; children need and crave boundries. He will never be able to stop Harry from loving Severus and should stop saying such nasty things about him. He should also tell Black to hold his tongue as well, but we all know that neither of them is mature enough to ever be that thoughtful.

    Great chapter!!

    Author's Response: You're right about everything. James needs to grow up . . .badly.
Title: Harry Explodes 05 Dec 2009 1:19 pm
Reviewer: blubaby (Anonymous) [Report This]
    u gurls rock! i luvv ur story!!! please keep on updating!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and we have just updated!
Title: Harry Explodes 05 Dec 2009 12:44 pm
Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed) [Report This]
    harry will fall off the hippogriff and get seriously hurt and james will be ban from ever taking care of harry again without cheperone

    Author's Response: Good guess and the next chapter's up! Yay!
Title: Harry Explodes 05 Dec 2009 5:31 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah I think there is going to be an accident with that bloody hippogriff!

    James why can't you ever use your brain??

    I really loved how accurately you portrayed 6 year old Harry here. He's perfect! And I feel so bad for him having to listen to Sirius (the idiot) and James (an even bigger one) say such nasty things about Severus. I would have blown up too!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I agree with you!
Title: Harry Explodes 05 Dec 2009 3:22 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying this story. I love your daddy Sev little Harry stories and now Lily gets to be in one!

    I bet Harry gets injured from the hippogriff.

    Author's Response: Yes she does and if you liked this one, you might also like Lily's Valentine, which is linked to my Never Again series and also Away In A Manger which features young Severus and baby Harry.
Title: Harry Explodes 05 Dec 2009 3:08 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh!! I've got a bad feeling about this "hippogriph" ride! A very bad feeling...


    Poor Harry, it must be very difficult to hear such things against someone he considers his mentor, his father...

    Great chappie. Do I get free butterbeer, sweets and 25 House points for guessing that Harry gets hurt on the Hippogriph, and Lily takes James to court to stop his visitation, or something along those lines.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, you're bad feeling is right.

    Yes, that's true. It really hurts him that James and Sirius insult Severus that way.

    yes you do and the next chapter's up on this, plus I started a new Christmas fic called Away In A Manger.

Title: Harry Explodes 05 Dec 2009 2:54 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    James the idiot is going to introduce a six year old boy to a Hippogriff who gets insulted really easily - I foresee trouble and injury ahead.

    Author's Response: And you'd be right. See the next chapter and thanks for reviewing.  he really IS an idiot.
Title: The Lupins' Advice 04 Dec 2009 5:01 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!Loved everything!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: The Lupins' Advice 04 Dec 2009 4:53 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! A lot of background here I liked how you explained Dora's father and how Sev feels guilty over his death even though he had nothing to do with it.

    I love how the Lupins are behind the Snapes all the way.

    I really hope James doesn't do something totally dumb, but knowing him . . .he probably will. Brilliant job both of you!

    Author's Response: You're right given James track record, expect something stupid.
Title: The Lupins' Advice 04 Dec 2009 4:47 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Really great chapter. I like how the Lupins are so supportive of Sev and Lily, they're really great friends. Can't wait to see what's next.

    Author's Response: Thanks! The Lupin will stand by the Snapes no matter what!

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