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Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 21 Nov 2009 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! I love Sev and Lily together so much! I hope James has really been taken care of, but something tells me that he will try and take this to court anyways, though I don't know how he'd win. After all, Harry clearly loves Sev and Lily witnessed the spanking.

    Great chapter!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: james might just try something like that eventually. He probably wouldn't win, not unless he tried to buy off the judge, but Harry would probably have a lot to say about james doing such  nasty things.  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 2: James' Reaction 21 Nov 2009 4:32 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    What a jerk! I have some select words for James that are not meant for Harry's ears! Good grief, why can't he just let it go!

    I must tell you, I really do like what you've done with the story and I think the universe is intriguing. Thanks for the good read!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he's really being an idiot here and not realizing the damage he's doing to Harry.

    Thanks and hope you like what comes next in this universe.

Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 21 Nov 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter--I really like the explanation behind this universe. It was clear and believeable because it did seem like Lily really wanted to make things work and didn't want to leave James, but in the end, somehow mustered up the strength to do it. You've painted her as a strong lady, but not totally impervious to weaknesses, which I like.

    While I personally dislike reading cp scenes, I think you handled it with finesse and made it sound appropriate to the behavior. Nice job, Snapegirl!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    She did really try and that's why it hurt her so much when she found that James was cheating on her, both the first and second time. It took a lot of courage for her to admit their marriage was a mistake and to then leave  with Harry and even greater courage to start all over again with Severus.

    As for the CP scene, I usually don't like writing them too graphically, but in this case it was necessary to the plotline and I'm glad I didn't turn you off.

Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual 21 Nov 2009 2:55 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Cissy and Remus are such a cute couple! And so are the twins! I love how they call the kids pups, and how they are still willing to help and support Lily and Severus.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 21 Nov 2009 12:31 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was so cute! And so sad too, poor Harry so confused with his dad saying mean things about his stepfather. And it's also causing doubt with Sev as a parent. James is such an IDIOT! But at least Severus has Lily.

    Author's Response: Thanks and you're right on all counts.
Title: Chapter 2: James' Reaction 21 Nov 2009 12:27 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, James is officially an ass. Severus is not a child abuser! You tell him off Lily! He reminds me of my sister's ex-fiancee.

    Author's Response: Oh that's not good! But you're right.
Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual 20 Nov 2009 7:58 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Remus and Narcissa? Well, this truly is a very AU story. ;) On the other hand... *pats Remus on the head for having the common sense not to spend time with James* and *pats Narcissa on the head for not being a stuck-up Pureblood*

    Good job on this chapter! I really enjoyed Remus and his little family. But - where's the rest of the story? *whine* Yes, it's a shameless plea for more. :)

    Author's Response:

    We really went for an AU pairing here but we think it works really well.

    More has been posted and we hope you like it!

Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 20 Nov 2009 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha ha! Deage James and give him a spanking? Severus, you wish! :)

    Author's Response: Yes, he does. It would be poetic justice, LOL!
Title: Chapter 2: James' Reaction 20 Nov 2009 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Uuh! Things get a bit more complicated! Nice! More drama, more! :) I'm so looking forward to what happens next! (Note to self: less exclamation marks. Do not get so excited, even if the story IS exciting. Very much so.)

    I must say, I've never thought of co-authoring a story with another writer, for the sole reason that it seems to me extremely encumbering to take into account another's views and ideas where my brain-child is concerned. :) But... you've managed to recreate the voice of the first chapter wonderfully, and there's no disparity between the writing styles. I applaud you on that! Good job! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! It's a comliment that you're so excited over this.

    Thanks so much! We collborated a lot when we wrote each chapter so they meshed properly. Luckily, we have similar styles and views. It's actually more fun than work.

Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 20 Nov 2009 7:27 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Some say, men are afraid of smart women. I can easily fit your James into that category! :D And Harry... poor dear; he's adorable, naughty or not. :)

    I truly admire your knack for portraying, ah, typical people. (I don't mean it in a bad way.) To incorporate character traits that are, well, typical - common, if you like - to large masses of people into fictional characters, requires good observation skills, not to mention 'a way with words'. ;) And it's done brilliantly here - I can totally picture the family drama. :)

    Very promising beginning!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much!

    I agree, James could be classed like that and also as a man who doesn't appreciate a woman who likes to work.  Hope you enjoy the family drama that's going to happen very soon.


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