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Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual 20 Nov 2009 9:57 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Fabulous start to this story! I cannot wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much and more has been posted!
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 20 Nov 2009 6:34 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, this reminds me so much of the time when my sisters and I set the curtains on fire in our house. We were alone and playing with a lit stick from our woodburning stove and the curtains next to it caught on fire.

    Luckily we managed to put it out but boy did we get our butts tanned when our dad found out.

    I'd say Harry knows better now, Lily is an awesome wife and James is such an idiot for cheating on her. I'll read more tomorrow! Great start!

    Author's Response: Thanks and that was a great flashback story!
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 20 Nov 2009 5:04 am
Reviewer: Wooster (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this so far!

    I only ever leave reviews when I have something specific to say...so here goes:

    1. Love the universe you've created. Very clever re-imagining of Grindelwald/Dumbledore/Tom Riddle

    2. I laughed out loud at the "Dinosaurs" reference.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much!

    You got the reference, yay! I was wondering who else would recognize that show, I grew up watching it.

    You'll see more Tom Riddle in future chapters.

Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual 20 Nov 2009 3:20 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm in love with this! It's adorable!

    Author's Response: Thanks and we have updated!
Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual 20 Nov 2009 2:23 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you really turn the HP world upside down! But it is good! Do you tell each other what you're doing, or does the other have to deal with whatever you write?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks.

    We do consult each other before we write a chapter to bat ideas back and forth before writing and making sure everything fits. It wouldn't be fair if we tried to surprise each other.

Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual 19 Nov 2009 9:59 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the Lupins! I always thought Remus would make a good father. I was surprised at Cissy, but that's a really interesting pairing. Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thanks and more has been added.
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 19 Nov 2009 9:42 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Such a great bond between Lily and Severus. The whole family is adorable!

    Author's Response: Aww you're sweet!
Title: Chapter 2: James' Reaction 19 Nov 2009 9:19 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah you tell 'em Lily!

    A spanking and it was deserved, is not child abuse! Even harry says so! James should watch what he says he's opening a nice can of worms here.

    Author's Response: Yes, i agree!
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 19 Nov 2009 9:13 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Lord, but Harry sure is a scamp! I love how you showed Lily's life in two perspectives and how you have both parents agree on punishments and so forth. It shows good teamwork! My husband and I do that. I'm sure Harry won't play with a wand ever again, Sev got his point across without being too harsh.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! No, he won't.
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 19 Nov 2009 8:40 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Really enjoying this story so much. Question, Harry is about six in this story? I love they way you have written Lily, such a spitfire! Love how Severus loves his family. Great story.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yes Harry is six here.  Yeah she sure is! Severus is a good dad here, if a bit strict. Thanks!

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