Hm. This is interesting so far; I'm curious as to how it will go. There have been so many Slytherin!Harry fics; but not so many that deal anything like realistically with how Harry (or anybody else!) would be. ::settles in to wait for the next chapter::
Author's Response: Don't worry you won't have to wait that long! Thank you for this amazing review, and I'm about to respond to your other review, which will be much more detailed then this!
I enjoyed your first chapter. You made me feel very sorry for Harry, and even for Snape and Pomfrey. I wanted to hug the Hufflepuff girl who pulled her friend away. Terrific chapter, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! (Hopefully I don't epic fail on this review all my other ones repeated words. Haha) I feel bad for them too! The girl just wanted her friend to pay attention.
| Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest
| 21 Nov 2009 3:20 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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Wow, very good start. The plot is flowing and you're making smooth transitions between points of view.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was very worried if the if I was flowing through the points of view correctly, or not. Thanks for the review!
| Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest
| 21 Nov 2009 12:42 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I did enjoy it but it was a little disjointed but first chapters are hard and I can't wait to read some more thank you
Author's Response: I get disjointed with a lot of things. o.o Than you for the review!
So sad. Poor Harry. The evidence is all there and Severus is choosing to ignore it. Ugh. I hope he comes to realize what a mistake this was on his part and comes around to help Harry. Great start, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: He is stubborn. It may take him a while. Lol! Thank you for this great review! It means a lot to me when people review and tell me what they think!
Harry faints at the Opening Feast and Snape says he's getting special treatment?
He needs to wake up and smell what he's shoveling!
Author's Response: Severus is blinded by the fact that Harry looks like his father. Hatred is a deep emotion, sometimes things don't normally go as we plan. It's hard to see past anger, I think. Wow, I'm so silly. Haha Thank you for your amazing review and I look forward to your next one!
You go Harry! Severus needs a swift kick in the ass for acting that way when he knew that the child had been abused; that he is the child of James Potter should be irrelevent. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: You know how he is, horribly stubborn when things he he thought were true ended up being a lie. :) Thanks for the review!
| Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest
| 20 Nov 2009 9:49 am
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| Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed)
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Ohhhhhh, this sound soo good and interesting. I await your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you! I look forward to your next review!
| Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest
| 20 Nov 2009 5:24 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Very nice start Asparas. I'm very anxious to see where you are going with the story.
I really hope that Snape will eventually see Harry for who he is. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! You always comment on both sites, I love that!
Hi, I just came upon this and it seems to be on a good start. I love how Harry wants to prove himself to Severus, to make him see the real Harry Potter, not the Boy-Who-Lived.Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I hope so, hehe. Thank you so much for the review, and I look forward to more! :) This means a lot when people review. Thank you.
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