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Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest 21 Nov 2009 3:20 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, very good start. The plot is flowing and you're making smooth transitions between points of view.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I was very worried if the if I was flowing through the points of view correctly, or not.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest 21 Nov 2009 12:42 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I did enjoy it but it was a little disjointed but first chapters are hard and I can't wait to read some more thank you

    Author's Response: I get disjointed with a lot of things. o.o Than you for the review!
Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest 20 Nov 2009 11:57 pm
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    So sad. Poor Harry. The evidence is all there and Severus is choosing to ignore it. Ugh. I hope he comes to realize what a mistake this was on his part and comes around to help Harry. Great start, and I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: He is stubborn. It may take him a while. Lol! Thank you for this great review! It means a lot to me when people review and tell me what they think!
Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest 20 Nov 2009 10:41 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry faints at the Opening Feast and Snape says he's getting special treatment?
    He needs to wake up and smell what he's shoveling!

    Author's Response: Severus is blinded by the fact that Harry looks like his father. Hatred is a deep emotion, sometimes things don't normally go as we plan. It's hard to see past anger, I think. Wow, I'm so silly. Haha Thank you for your amazing review and I look forward to your next one!
Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest 20 Nov 2009 10:03 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    You go Harry! Severus needs a swift kick in the ass for acting that way when he knew that the child had been abused; that he is the child of James Potter should be irrelevent. I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: You know how he is, horribly stubborn when things he he thought were true ended up being a lie. :) Thanks for the review!
Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest 20 Nov 2009 9:49 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhhhhh, this sound soo good and interesting. I await your next update.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I look forward to your next review!
Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest 20 Nov 2009 5:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice start Asparas. I'm very anxious to see where you are going with the story.

    I really hope that Snape will eventually see Harry for who he is. Great job.

    Author's Response: Thank you! You always comment on both sites, I love that!
Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest 20 Nov 2009 4:52 am
Reviewer: cauldron_calamity (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, I just came upon this and it seems to be on a good start. I love how Harry wants to prove himself to Severus, to make him see the real Harry Potter, not the Boy-Who-Lived.Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: I hope so, hehe. Thank you so much for the review, and I look forward to more! :) This means a lot when people review. Thank you. 
Title: Last Breaths are Always the Hardest 20 Nov 2009 4:47 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry - he never gets a break. Maybe his determination will win.

    Author's Response:

    Yep, I'd like to thank you for spending your time reviewing! I hope you continue reading.  


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