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Reviews For Forced Confessions
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! ^_^
Author's Response: Lol, thank you! I'm very glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! ^_^
I really like the first paragraph; it makes it perfectly believable that Harry would do something so silly as sneak into Snape's potions stores. The conversation between Snape and Harry is wonderful. Snape's making full use of the opportunity at hand - and yet really he isn't, he isn't doing any taunting or anything and in the end he offers Harry some advice. I like this side of Snape. Very cool. The idea of Harry and the Boy Who Lived being two different people was well described and I like Harry's realisation that Snape's one of the few people to notice. It's cool that Harry loosens up enough to ask Snape for advice and then immediately after gets defiant and tries to stand up; it's very Harry to refuse to admit limits, especially from Snape. The ending is great: dreamless sleep, scar remover... and threats :) And now we return you to your usual programming... Great, great story. I loved it! Author's Response: Snape can only be nice so long, then it seems he must make up for it by being extra despicable, lol. ^_^ A comparision to canon? I don't know whether to blush or hyperventilate, ^_-
Author's Response: You're very welcome, thank you for reviewing! :) I appreciate it.
It was nice that Snape didn't just give Harry detention and send him back to Gryiffindor. Of course having him under Veritaserum late at night when he could b questioned is too good an opportunity to pass up. Harry really should learn to brew Drealmess Sleep or get Hermione to brew it for him. It would be much easier and than he wouldn't get hurt or end up in these bad situations. Great story! Author's Response: *Headdesk* I'm afraid I badly need to re-read the books. Sorry, but thank you for pointing it out. I'll go back and edit, with Snape's keen eyes he would probably notice it is his Veritaserum vial lying broken around Harry, the vial could have been an odd colour, so I'll change it to that.
Author's Response: Thank you so much angel! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much grugster! ^_^
I had to laugh at Harry being doused in Veritaserum, literally. I hope the Potions didn't harm his Invisibility Cloak. You mentioned that Harry thought back to the times McGonagall dismissed his concerns, and latching onto that could be a lovely sequel to this one-shot. I had a busy day today and this made me smile. ;) Author's Response: I'm so glad it made you smile, :D No, Harry's cloak is fine, after all it has been through, it would have been sad for it to get damaged because of a potion. Thank you for reviewing! |
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