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Reviews For Forced Confessions
Title: Forced Confessions 19 Jan 2010 5:01 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol. I loved the ending. Very well done.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Title: Forced Confessions 14 Jan 2010 9:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely piece Both IC thank you so much

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! ^_^
Title: Forced Confessions 02 Jan 2010 9:24 am
Reviewer: ivyjag (Anonymous) [Report This]
    that was a lovely story. the last line was killer :)

    Author's Response: Lol, thank you! I'm very glad you liked it!
Title: Forced Confessions 11 Dec 2009 2:52 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! I always love Veritaserum stories and yours was one of the best! Thanks for sharing.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! ^_^
Title: Forced Confessions 06 Dec 2009 4:36 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome! I love that they can come to a sort of temporary truce and then at the end things go back to normal. You did a great job of writing a story that could easily have been a scene deleted from the original book, it fits so well into canon.

    I really like the first paragraph; it makes it perfectly believable that Harry would do something so silly as sneak into Snape's potions stores. The conversation between Snape and Harry is wonderful. Snape's making full use of the opportunity at hand - and yet really he isn't, he isn't doing any taunting or anything and in the end he offers Harry some advice. I like this side of Snape. Very cool. The idea of Harry and the Boy Who Lived being two different people was well described and I like Harry's realisation that Snape's one of the few people to notice. It's cool that Harry loosens up enough to ask Snape for advice and then immediately after gets defiant and tries to stand up; it's very Harry to refuse to admit limits, especially from Snape.

    The ending is great: dreamless sleep, scar remover... and threats :) And now we return you to your usual programming...

    Great, great story. I loved it!

    Author's Response:

    Snape can only be nice so long, then it seems he must make up for it by being extra despicable, lol. ^_^ A comparision to canon? I don't know whether to blush or hyperventilate, ^_-
    Thank you very much for the brilliant and constuctive review! I appreciate you taking the time to write it!
    ~ S

     

Title: Forced Confessions 05 Dec 2009 3:59 am
Reviewer: Coriander (Signed) [Report This]
    I really, really liked it. Thank you for posting and telling me about the fest, now I just have to go and read all the other stories! :o)

    Author's Response: You're very welcome, thank you for reviewing! :) I appreciate it.
Title: Forced Confessions 30 Nov 2009 7:27 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    If Harry fairly reeks of Veritaserum he must really be soaked in it. Didn't Snape say in GoF that it was tastless, oderless and clear so that he could slip it into people's drinks?

    It was nice that Snape didn't just give Harry detention and send him back to Gryiffindor. Of course having him under Veritaserum late at night when he could b questioned is too good an opportunity to pass up.

    Harry really should learn to brew Drealmess Sleep or get Hermione to brew it for him. It would be much easier and than he wouldn't get hurt or end up in these bad situations.

    Great story!

    Author's Response:

    *Headdesk* I'm afraid I badly need to re-read the books. Sorry, but thank you for pointing it out. I'll go back and edit, with Snape's keen eyes he would probably notice it is his Veritaserum vial lying broken around Harry, the vial could have been an odd colour, so I'll change it to that.
    Thank you again!
    ~ S

Title: Forced Confessions 28 Nov 2009 1:52 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was so good! Very Rowling-esque! It was quite angsty and sad but then the end made me smile, I can really imagine him saying that! Lovely fic!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much angel! :)
Title: Forced Confessions 28 Nov 2009 1:11 am
Reviewer: grugster (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great story. I really enjoyed reading it! Snape was so in character. Lovely.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much grugster! ^_^
Title: Forced Confessions 24 Nov 2009 9:05 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good. You kept both Harry and Snape in character, which can be very hard to do. Your whole idea was very plausible and could fit nicely in canon.

    I had to laugh at Harry being doused in Veritaserum, literally. I hope the Potions didn't harm his Invisibility Cloak.

    You mentioned that Harry thought back to the times McGonagall dismissed his concerns, and latching onto that could be a lovely sequel to this one-shot. I had a busy day today and this made me smile. ;)

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad it made you smile, :D No, Harry's cloak is fine, after all it has been through, it would have been sad for it to get damaged because of a potion. Thank you for reviewing!
    ~ S


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