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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Not Quite So Terrible 25 Nov 2009 11:11 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was such a sweet and cute story! I loved it, especially how little Harry was so totally at ease with Severus. I do hope this new understanding can last once Harry is older.
Title: Not Quite So Terrible 25 Nov 2009 10:23 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww this was a cute little story
Title: Not Quite So Terrible 25 Nov 2009 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Saffronfrog (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this snippet into Snape's life (in his role as Harry's caretaker) and a young and innocent Harry. I liked the use of a boggart to bring justification to a child's fear of a monster under the bed. Also, I think a good choice to not really dwell on the actual deaging and Snape raving over him being stuck looking after Harry - we all know that's what will happen, that's why the site exists!
    I hope you carry the story on, I would like to see more of the everyday adventures a young Harry and a more gentle Snape get into.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really glad that you liked it.

    I'm trying to come up with some more ideas for what the two of them could get up to. ;-}

     Thank you again for your review.

Title: Not Quite So Terrible 25 Nov 2009 9:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story I loved the cat scene and the name althiugh I'm not sure Severus would have read TS Elliot, Thank you so much for the story

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much.

     I'm not so sure that he would have read the book on his own, but I am sure that Lily would have read it at some point. And she would have either told Severus some of the poems, or would have "made" him read it. Poor guy doesn't have much defense against those eyes. ;-}

Title: Not Quite So Terrible 25 Nov 2009 9:00 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute.

    I was waiting for Harry to say "but it thought it was a BOY cat," when Severus said the cat's name was MISStopheles.

    This does indeed beg for more. Including the return of Harry the Adult.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

    You made me laugh so hard when I read your comment. That is great. I never even thought of that. ;-}

    I'm trying to work on more chapters, if someone would cooperate and not throw other story ideas at me... *glares at plot bunnies as they peer around a box* Anyways, I'm trying to come up with some more stories about them, but it may be a little while. ;-}

Title: Not Quite So Terrible 25 Nov 2009 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, very cute. This screams for a continuation, though. Maybe something about how Snape's relationship with his student has changed, after Harry grows up again?

    And I loved Snape's cat! Since it has a name with a background, I would've loved to see it protect Harry from the Ripper-Boggart. :) Ah, well.

    Nicely done!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for reviewing, and for being the first reviewer!

    I'm so happy that you liked the story. ;-}

    I'm trying to come up with some ideas for further chapters, and get them typed up... ;-}

     

    I'm glad that you liked Misto. Yeah, one of my betas said something about that. I tried to have him do a little bit, but I see that i could have done more. I kinda introduced him and then forgot about the poor little guy. Sorry Misto. *Pets small furball.* I actually got the name from the musical Cats. I can see Lily reading the book and either telling Severus about it or making him read it too. ;-}


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