Ahhh! Could you possibly write a more amazing cliffhanger? Awesome! Must read more!
As soon as I read the summary, I immediately wanted to read this! *starts reading*
*finishes*
I LOVE THIS!!
As soon as I read the summary, I immediately wanted to read this! *starts reading*
*finishes*
I LOVE THIS!!
Oh that was excellent. I like this version better than Canon. Hee hee. I hope that in THIS version that it's Malfoy that gets in trouble with Snape, not Harry.
When is Harry going to learn that body binds and disarming spells aren't always going to cut it when fighting dark wizards?
Yikes! I can't wait to find out what happens to Harry.
Author's Response: I guess it's difficult to break a habit, lol. Thanks for reviewing!
This sounds brilliant! I've been looking forward to someone forming a response to this challenge (I'm too cowadly to try and do it myself!) and that definitely lived up to my expectations! I loved it!
Author's Response: I've been waiting for someone to respond to it, too! But I couldn't take it any longer, so I wrote my own, lol. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Dec 2009 8:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Woho (Anonymous)
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WOW I liked this one ^^ really :D:D:D but I do hope Draco will get a hell lot of crap for this one!! I mean, a crucio is a serious crime!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! This is a subject that has really been bothering me, because his punishment needs to be severe. He did cast an Unforgivable, after all, but I just can't bring myself to send him to Azkaban, lol. I'll figure it out, I guess. The believability might be a little iffy, but try to close your eyes to it, haha. Anywho, thanks your review!
Great beginning.
What's wrong with Harry? And why is Draco so affected?
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I believe you'll have to read the next chapter to find out, but I'm glad that you've gotten into the story. Thanks so much for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 07 Dec 2009 9:16 am
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| Reviewer: monte (Anonymous)
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Wow! awesome fic! I can't wait to see what happens to harry! did he fall on some broken shards and get stabbed in the back? cause I can't imagine your malfoy being sick over something he did intentionally, so I'm thinking it has to be some grotesque physical injury of some sort! Dunno really. anywho, looking forward to an update!
Author's Response: Hm, well, I guess you'll have to read on to find out. :) I'm glad that the story was stimulating enough to get the readers thinking, lol. Thanks for reviewing, Monte!
Interesting I can't wait to find out exactly what was happening to Harry and how Snape and the school deal with mini Lucius and his evil actions.
Author's Response: Hm, some of your questions will be addressed next chapter. I hope it's enough to keep you interested. Thanks for the review! :)
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