Oh my goodness! What a great start! I really hope you continue; this is awesome for a first fic! My hat goes off to you! I can't wait to find out what else was wrong with Harry--what did Draco change when he cast the Cruciatus Curse? I love how you described Harry going out of consciousness at the end; wonderful job!
-P.G.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the awesome review! It's exciting to see that others are enjoying something I wrote. I hope to keep you interested, and thanks again!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Nov 2009 9:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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It's looking like a very interesting story. I'm looking forward the next chapter. =o)
Author's Response: Thanks for your encouragement! I hope the next chapter is just as exciting. :)
Oooo!! I like so far!! Keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. I hope I can hold your attention. Thanks so much for the review!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Nov 2009 8:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Eniledam (Anonymous)
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What a WONDERFUL plot line! Please update soon, I can not wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: It's actually Bratling's, but I agree that it is a very exciting challenge. Thank you for reviewing! :)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Nov 2009 8:18 pm
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| Reviewer: DottyLizard (Anonymous)
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I never did like that Harry had cast the Cruciatus on Draco, one of the things I just couldn't like about that book. So I'm rather glad that you've fixed that problem, though now you've provided with another dilemma - why is Harry having trouble breathing? Presumably everything in the past has been canon and this is a turning point. I just hope this harry discovers what that Sectumsempra curse does before he tries on a living thing. Room of Requirement might be a good idea...
Thanks for posting - this looks like an interesting idea.
Author's Response: Thanks, although the idea was actually Bratling's. Harry casting sectumsempra on Malfoy always made me cringe, too, so the challenge seemed like a lot of fun to me.
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