Excellent job - will there be more? *hopes* :D misundersnape...
Interessting and nice. CCAP
Oooh! I do love this, very much. I adore the style you wrote this in, first from Harry's perspective and then from Snape's. I've seen some other replies to this prompt floating around, but I have to say that I like yours the most.
Snape is in character, as are the other professors. And the take on the curse with a legit physical aliment is refreshing and intriguing. I also like how, though Harry's thought process, you come to a reasonable conclusion as to why he would decide against casting the curse.
--Alis Syn
Please update! I'll give you some jelly beans! Seriously, if I could give you some I would. I got like five bags of them this morning.
Title: Chapter 2
| 07 Aug 2010 6:01 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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This is awesome! I liked the whole thing! So snape saw the scars? i'm looking forward to more for sure! I am positive that it will be sweet! :)
This is a great start. I'm most definitely looking forward to more! :)
the story is good so far, you write just like JK, I almost believed that this could be cannon. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Ok, Let me tell you something. I have been DIEING for a story like this, where Harry gets hit with the curse. I have never found one. Until now. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I can't wait for more!
update? Please? This is too good to not continue!
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