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Title: Chapter 2 04 Dec 2009 6:37 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh! I don't know if that's a good or bad voice. I'm almost afraid to find out. Is Harry in some kind of version of heaven here? Is that why Sirius and Ron are there? Good job!

    Author's Response: I wouldn't call it Heaven. And voices can be both good and bad. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: Chapter 1 04 Dec 2009 6:36 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Hermione and Harry make a great team. And Harry here is displaying all of Severus' tendencies to focus exclusively on a potion showing he's really Sev's son. This is a very realistic portrayal.

    Now what on earth has happened to Harry?

    Author's Response:

    Severus and Harry's potion obession must be part of their blood then. After all, why would they have the same obession since they were seperated for most of Harry's life.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 3 01 Dec 2009 4:25 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, I was right! That's such a cool thing that Severus did. I liked it a lot. And now I can't wait for him to wake up. Good for him telling Harry to marry Hermione and to not have the wedding till then. I loved how their hands matched too. Great detail.

    Author's Response: Severus will be waking up very soon! :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 2 01 Dec 2009 4:21 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow was Harry almost dead and somewhere in the realm of the dead? And who is calling him? Going to read and find out! I'm betting it's Hermione or maybe Severus?

    Author's Response: Good guess! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: Chapter 1 01 Dec 2009 4:19 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh what a cliffhanger!

    I love how you wrote Harry and Hermione together and hope she can figure out what's the matter with Harry.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3 29 Nov 2009 1:01 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Your use of imagery is great. I'm glad you explained why Snape could, in effect, really be there. And it was nice how he asked Harry to marry Hermione.
    You've got a funny line of code up at the top by accident...

    Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the line of code. I got rid of it. Thanks for reviewing! I hope you like the next chapters. :)
Title: Chapter 2 29 Nov 2009 12:55 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    That's an interesting idea. Why are Ron and Sirius a bit off in Harry's memory of them?

    Author's Response: Ron and Sirius are a bit off because they aren't really Ron and Sirius. They're parts of Harry's mind and he's starting to lose them. I hope that explains. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1 29 Nov 2009 12:51 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, I'm so glad you have written a sequel. The other ended so tragically. And a cliffy already! It's weird to think that a year has already passed. You described the changes well in your story. :)

    Author's Response: I liked the idea of a sequel and it means that things can get better. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

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