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Reviews For A Dangerous Game
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 22 Oct 2022 11:56 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is an intriguing start to your story!
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 04 Mar 2022 8:04 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m hooked.
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 25 Aug 2017 9:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter. Very frightening scene at the beginning and Dumbledore being his usual manipulative self!
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 27 Apr 2014 4:08 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    test
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 19 Jan 2014 6:53 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder why Severus was required to give his blood? It was a nice beginning and left me wanting to know what is coming next.
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 04 Dec 2009 2:25 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh, why do I have a bad feeling about this?

    Author's Response: Because you are very intuitive! :)
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 02 Dec 2009 2:14 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Very intriguing beginning. Can't wait to see where this goes. Towards a happy ending, I hope. :D

    Author's Response:

    Aw thanks. Oh...you'll have to wait and see, like about fifteen minutes or so! :)

     

     

Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 02 Dec 2009 2:34 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    This is certainly an interesting start. I'm curious as to what Albus is asking Severus and what this whole army of Voldemort's exactly entails.

    Author's Response: Aw well, you would not be able to guess it or even believe that the man has the nerve to ask Severus such a thing!  Let's just say that Voldemort's goal is eerily similar to that of Hitler and his nazis. Very evil indeed.
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 02 Dec 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "Severus grit his teeth in irritation as he sneered at the doddering old wizard spewing nonsense from his aged pruned lips, as though he was handing out lemon drops and sugar quills to snot-nosed, spoilt brats." - I'm not sure what it was about this line, but it made me laugh! ^_^ I think it was the part about the "aged pruned lips" lol Yeah, that was great...

    But on my Pandora! This has got me VERY interested! And my little mind (yes little lol) is thinking up all kinds of possibilities as to what's going on here! I was a little sad, but not all that surprised about the lines talking about how Severus makes himself unattractive to women because he doesn't want to fall in love again. That made me sad...but that's probably part of the reason he really looked like that in the books...

    I am very interested in this Pandora! It was a very good start! I'll have to read later on when I'm not drowning in homework. (You see, I surfaced for a time to see what all I was missing) Expect more reviews from me later on!

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee, I really had an image in my mind, when I wrote that line. I could just imagine Snape thinking that!  Well, I was trying to think of a way that Snape could diss Albus about his age, and prunes just came to mind!

     

    Thanks Ivy, and you updated too, and it was a great chappie.  Aw, you'll have to keep on reading to find out.

     

    Severus never truly got over Lily, and o why bother to make himself attractive to other women, when no one can hold a candle to his soul mate?

     

    Thanks Ivy, don't worry about it. I am honoured that you took the time to review at all, when you are so busy. Thank you very much!

Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 01 Dec 2009 11:14 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start, Pandora! I'm really looking forward to the rest of this, it's lovely to see that it's finished so I can read it all at once.

    Author's Response: Oh thank you Angel. I really wanted it to be finished before I posted it, so that it would flow better, but I was worried that it was too rushed.

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