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Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 22 Oct 2022 11:59 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’ve never appreciated how Dumbledore always uses Lily’s memory as a tool to manipulate Severus.
Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 25 Aug 2017 9:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry your scene struck the loneliness and his despair thank you
Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 04 Dec 2009 2:57 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that we don't even know what he's agreeing to yet--way to keep the suspense going!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Oh thanks. You're going to be shocked when you find out!! I know that Harry was !
Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 02 Dec 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh...whatever Dumbles has planned, if Severus doesn't like it then I'm sure Harry will not like it either! Poor Harry. I did feel sorry for him. It's terrible to lose someone close to you like that. And I did feel sorry for Sev too about how he'd never really be free... That's it, I'm going on to the next chappie! Another good one Pandora! :D

    Author's Response:

    Well, they're both going into this situation with low expectations, so maybe it'll all work out better than they hoped.Yes, poor Harry; he's had a really rough time of it. Sirius' death has really hit him hard.

    Severus has been carrying a lot of guilt around with him.  He needs to forgive himself. Protecting Harry is his way of making amends.

     

    Thanks Ivy! I loved your chappie by the way. Love that story!

Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 02 Dec 2009 2:21 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, Dumbledore gets his way - again. But if that means Snape will try to make amends and be a little nicer to Harry, I'm certainly not complaining. :)

    Author's Response: Well...it's always darkest before the storm, so Snape won't change instantly, but between the potion and the blood adoption, he'll get a little push in the right direction. 
Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 02 Dec 2009 4:06 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start. I hope things become clear soon. I'm on tenterhooks to find out what is going on.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Tambra.  Things WILL become clear soon, but the motivation behind it, may not!

Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 02 Dec 2009 2:49 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. He's so depressed over losing Sirius and now whatever Dumbledore has planned for him is just going to make things worse.

    Ugh, Dumbledore is guilting Severus into doing whatever he has planned and I just hope that once the situation becomes clear, Sev won't take out his frustration at following Dumbledore's orders on Harry.

    *hugs Harry* He needs a big one right now.

    Author's Response:

    It's very difficult for Harry to lose the only father-figure he's ever had, and yes Dumbledore is really asking a lot of him.  But don't worry, it might just work out better than Harry ever thought possible,  and Harry will be richer for it.

     

    Naughty Dumbledore. He's pulling Snape's strings like a puppet.  Snape may resent Harry at the beginning, and yes, take out his frustrations on him, but eventually Harry will win him over; after all, Harry is a great kid, with a big heart.

     

    He really does need a hug, the poor dear, doesn't he?

Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 02 Dec 2009 12:03 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Ron's character a lot in this chapter. Dumbledore is really pulling Snape's heart string with that last comment, isn't he?

    Author's Response: Oh thanks Jan. I love to write Ron too. He comes out with some good lines at times. He's so fun to write.  Yeah Dumbledore is really manipulative, and he knows just how to draw Snape in, hook, line and sinker.
Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 01 Dec 2009 11:18 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    You portray Severus so well. The Headmaster makes me laugh, because he is so utterly Albus Dumbledore.

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I appreciate that. Snape's character is very challenging to write at times. You want to keep him in character but have him grow as well. It is a very diffulct feat indeed.

     

    Chuckle chuckle. Yeah, Albus is very Albus...lemon drops and all.

Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 01 Dec 2009 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    It's always good to see Harry with his friends. I loved their interactions and their concern and protectiveness.

    Of course we all knew Albus would have his way...when has he ever not? The man is truly a genius at getting his own way, isn't he? People say that Severus is the consummate Slytherin, but I actually think Albus can out-Slytherin even him, lol.

    Great chapter again!

    Author's Response:

    Harry's friends have always been a pillar of support for him, and they are very special to Harry. He would not make a serious move in  his life or make any seirous life-changing decision whithout their input.

     

    Albus IS very manipulative, yes.  Hmm..Dumbledore must have tricked the hat, I think.

     

    Thanks Kristeh. Can't wait for SC!!!


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