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Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 23 Oct 2022 1:44 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the lovely chapter.
Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 26 Aug 2017 6:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely angsty chapter
Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 22 Dec 2009 7:36 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    CUTE!! XD Harry and Snape are getting along! YAYS! I did like it when Snape would yell at Harry and then be all "Did you eat?" That made me smile. And the whole letter bit, I thought Harry was going to get it then. But luckily that potion had really started to work because I bet old Snape wouldn't have cared overly much if he laid into the boy a little. Phew! Harry was lucky there! And seeing Harry and Snape getting along, even having a- dare I say- heart to heart was just beautiful. But I did find a little mistake. The very last word you added a "g" to Slytherin. No worries though. (I do that all the time while typing) Brilliant chappie!! :D

    Author's Response:

    Oops, I'lll go fix the g on Slytherin. Thanks for pointing that out.

     

    Yeah, I think that Snape (dare I say it) is mellowing out a bit Hee hee!  Yeah, heart to heart, and I just used YOUR expression.

     

    Yeah, Snape is finding it hard to maintain his anger, because he keeps feeling the need to care and protect Harry, and although he would deny it, it's not just the potion making him feeling that way.



    Author's Response:

    Oops, I'lll go fix the g on Slytherin. Thanks for pointing that out.

     

    Yeah, I think that Snape (dare I say it) is mellowing out a bit Hee hee!  Yeah, heart to heart, and I just used YOUR expression.

     

    Yeah, Snape is finding it hard to maintain his anger, because he keeps feeling the need to care and protect Harry, and although he would deny it, it's not just the potion making him feeling that way.

Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 04 Dec 2009 6:33 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, is time for the big finale! I can't wait!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yeah....coming up!!
Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 02 Dec 2009 3:49 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    There's only one thing to say: aw. :) And this place was so perfectly Snape-ish: "This conversation had been just a tad too personal for his liking, and he'd had his quota of sappy emotion-filled conversation for a lifetime." Wonderful, that.

    I'm so glad Snape is finally accepting Harry, and Harry on his part finds out a bit more about Lily's relationship with Severus.

    Very, very nice chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I love a Snapey-Snape!

     

    It's not easy for Snape to talk about Lily...especially to Harry. That is a big sign that things are changing between them.

     

    Thanks.

Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 02 Dec 2009 5:16 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! *smiles* Harry and Sev are getting along finally though since the next chapter is the last I have to wonder if it's just a calm before the storm. *runs off to find out*

    Author's Response:

    Aw, I wouldn't do that to you, would I? (Looks innocently around)

     

    Naw...I'm not THAT evil. I like happy endings, after all. But to get to that point!!  (Evil chuckle, and maniacal laugh)

Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 02 Dec 2009 12:15 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry, Harry, Harry. You just can't resist temptation, can you?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Aw c'mon, he wouldn't be a Gryffindor if he liked to play it safe and obey the rules, now would he?

     

    Thanks.


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