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Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 23 Oct 2022 1:47 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Harry’s new powers. It would be fun to see the Dark Lord get a taste of them! Thanks for the nice story.
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 04 Mar 2022 9:34 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant!
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 01 May 2021 1:51 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Tbh this chapter felt really rushed like you just slapped a finish sticker on it. I'd give the previous chapters a 10 each but this one, at most, a5 (and most of that because harry's new powers are pretty cool). But I do thank you for a great read
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 26 Aug 2017 7:05 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely ending thank you
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 28 Dec 2014 6:53 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    testing
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 26 Dec 2009 2:09 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Harry finally has what he has always longed for, a parent that loves and cares for him. Someone who will do anything to protect him.

    Author's Response: Oh thanks. Yeah, it took awhile to get there, but Snape will be there for Harry in a way that no one else has ever been.  Yes, and he would even die to protect Harry.
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 22 Dec 2009 7:55 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "I will not use my new and improved super powers to conspire with the evil medi-witch, Madame Pompfrey, to imprison my Professsor and father, against his will in this dreadful hospital wing."- Best. Line. EVER!! I laughed so hard I think I woke everyone up in the house! XD That whole section of Severus trying to sneak out was just brilliant!! XD I'm still giggling looking at it! Brilliant!

    And phew! I thought Sev was a goner for a minute, especially when Dumbledore just said they couldn't help Snape. Yay super powers! lol And the end with the birthday party, well that was adorable. Yays Snape! The last line was perfect.

    Fantastic story, Pandora! Sorry it took so long to read it, but it was amazing. I enjoyed it lots! :D

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee! Thanks. Yeah, Sev does NOT like being an invalid, or feeling helpless.

     

    Harry got angry and saved Severus. I think that both our boys are starting to care for each other more than they'd like to admit.

     Thanks Ivy. I'm so honoured that you took the time to not only read the story, you actually reviewed each chappie. Thanks so much.

Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 11 Dec 2009 2:57 am
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    A very enjoyable story - fast paced but not overly so, and just the right amount of chapters for a quick(ish) read. Severus' 'return to sender' letter made my heart squeeze, but at least he's got Harry now and Harry has him! Thanks for writing!

    Author's Response:

    Oh thank you so much. I was worried that the relationship was a little rushed because of the time restraints.

    I had  that Elvis Presley song in my mind as I wrote that phrase!  Too sad, isn't it?  But you are right. He has Harry now.  Thanks for your comments.

Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 05 Dec 2009 11:42 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. I like the progression. I would have liked a few more stops along the way, to see more of the turning points. You wrote the characters well and in character.

    Thanks

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much. I would have liked to take time to show their relationship progress, but I might write  a side story or a short sequel to show more of Snape and Harry's relationship.

     

     

Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 04 Dec 2009 6:42 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I liked that so much! Great fic!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks PG!! I can't believe that you reviewed every chappie, that was really nice.

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