Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For A Dangerous Game
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 02 Dec 2009 3:59 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, such a lovely ending. I was disappointed that Voldemort stayed alive, though. But the birthday party definitely made up for it. :) I'm so happy for Harry. And Snape, of course, the old grouch. ;)

    Very nice story that needs a sequel. Badly. ;)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Ramelia. I left Voldie alive, because I want to eventually write more of this uiniverse, or a side-story. I had to keep it short for the fest, but I got carried away with the relationship, and then I had to end it!!

     

    I'm happy for Harry and Snape the grouch.

     

    I will definitely think about a sequel. I miss writing the story now, and I feel that there are many unanswered questions.

Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 02 Dec 2009 8:43 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked the idea and your writing style a lot, but I wish that it didn't end here. I also felt like the relationship between them (even with the help of the potion) was rushed, and I would have liked to have seen more of the interaction between them during that time between hatred and becoming a family. Your writing is fantastic though, and my heart was tearing up at times reading this.

    Author's Response:

    I agree JA, but I had a deadline to finish the story, so I didn't have much choice but to speed it along, but when I wrote this, I thought to myself that I'd like to write a side-story, or a sequel to explore more of Harry and Sev's growing relationship.  I couldn't do that in eleven chapters, but perhaps in a side-story, I could fill the gaps in-between.

     

    Thanks very much for your compliments, I didn't mean to make you cry. You need some of Angel's tissues I believe, or perhaps your very own box?

Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 02 Dec 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww how sweet. I'm so happy that Harry got the father he always wanted. A surprise party for him. That was just awesome as it totally took Harry by surprise.

    I had to totally laugh at the line Severus was threatening to make Harry write. I can just picture Sev trying to sneak out of the Hospital Wing multiples times during the day.

    I really enjoyed this sweet story, Pandora. Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Ella. At least Harry feels loved and cared for. He'll never forget Sirius, and no one could replace him in Harry's heart, but now he has a father that really will look out for him.

     

    Harry hasn't had very many great birthday's, so he really deserved to have a great sixteenth birthday.

     

    Yeah...Snape would not be a model patient now, would he?  I could just imagine Poppy threatening him too! Hee hee!

     

    Thanks Ella, and I'm really looking forward to an update from you too!!

Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 02 Dec 2009 1:52 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I so loved this story. Sequel??? Maybe (puppy dog eyes)

    Author's Response:

    Oh thank you. I'm thinking about it. I love puppies.  :)

     

    I just can't promise when, as I've neglected my other stories. but I did plan on writing a side-story or a short sequel, as I was not able to explore Sev and Harry's relationship as I really wanted to, since I had a deadline to finish the story.

     

Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 02 Dec 2009 12:16 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    The last line was so cuuuute!!! *grabs tissue AGAIN*

    Lovely end to a lovely fic, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Great fest entry!

    Author's Response:

    Wow, I think that i've counted at least three boxes of kleenexes.  Here...I'll reimburse you. After all...it's my fault.

     

    Thank you Angel. You are so kind.  I hope that it wasn't too sappy and ending.


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5