| Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light
| 22 Oct 2022 11:56 pm
|
| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Oh, this is an intriguing start to your story!
| Title: Chapter 11: End of Game
| 01 May 2021 1:51 am
|
| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Tbh this chapter felt really rushed like you just slapped a finish sticker on it. I'd give the previous chapters a 10 each but this one, at most, a5 (and most of that because harry's new powers are pretty cool). But I do thank you for a great read
| Title: Chapter 8: Bound by Blood Ties
| 30 Apr 2021 11:53 pm
|
| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Oh now it's getting gooooood lol cue maniacal laughing
| Title: Chapter 7: Stand By Your Side
| 30 Apr 2021 11:32 pm
|
| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
That's one reason I could never mind hermione. I mean to most people she's just rational and intelligent. But to be she trusts adults more then the best friend who's put his life in danger multiple times and she's 100% likely to agree with an adults plan simply because they are adults. What good is this, just that the bond may make them feel differently towards each other? So in the meantime he should just forget all the taunting and the violent way snape treats him at every opportunity. It's good that she can see the benefits but for once I just want her to be harry's friend first and Dumbledores girl second
| Title: Chapter 6: At Odds
| 30 Apr 2021 11:14 pm
|
| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
It's so unfair that dumbledore expects harry to just believe snape won't hurt him-- he's got like zero proof except that dumbledore thinks so. And harry blames dumbledore for sirius death too so he's got no reason to trust it. If I were him, I'd make snape take an unbreakable vow that if he ever intentionally harms harry mentally, physically, or psychologically whether through muggle or magical means, it'll have the same consequences as breaking an unbreakable vow (death). I mean I know snape won't hurt harry, but this harry has just lost sirius and is being beaten by the dursleys who dumbledore sent him to and who is being tormented by every vitriolic syllable that escapes snape's mouth. And this plan doesn't really do anything for harry except make him a stronger warrior for them to send into battle. Yet again they concern themselves with him as a pawn or their savior but not with harry potter, the human child they left with abusive muggles and never once checked on not even when he started school obviously malnourished. He has such little reason to care or fight for them, honestly, I can see him even now telling em both to sod off but I know he won't (there'd be no more story lol)
| Title: Chapter 5: Say what?
| 30 Apr 2021 10:05 pm
|
| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Please for the love of merlin let this be one of the good stories wher harry's fed the f*ck up and tells dumbledore and snape what they can do and where they can go with their manipulative bullying bullsh**
| Title: Chapter 11: End of Game
| 26 Aug 2017 7:05 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
| Title: Chapter 10: Secrets
| 26 Aug 2017 6:58 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Thank you a lovely angsty chapter
|