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Title: Chapter 4: Retribution--Moody Style 02 Dec 2009 12:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yeah. I'm so glad that the Order was able to tell that Harry was hurt somehow, and that they came to get him. I'm assuming that - it seems just too perfect for them to show up otherwise, unannounced at such a time. Vernon got what was coming to him, but I do worry about Dudley. He's going to have to take care of his parents. : Poor Vernon probably won't get his promotion tomorrow. Oh well. Good chapter. The descriptions of Harry were rather avid and well done. I wish Snape could see him like that - Harry is definitely not pampered.

    Author's Response:

    Well...the order showed up because Dumbledore sent them there, but yeah, it was good timiing and they just knew by looking at Harry, that he wasn't well.  Dumbledore sent the order members there for a reason, which you'll find out soon.

     

    Yeah, Vernon deserved that and a lot more. I worry about Dudley too, but their condition will wear off in a few days; it's not a permanent condition. 

     

     Thanks Jan. Yes, Snape is going to discover just how "pampered" the little prince is, and then he's going to have to do a lot of self-examination of his own feelings towards Harry, and his own treatment of the boy over the years.

Title: Chapter 6: At Odds 02 Dec 2009 12:01 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, so sad! I have to go and get a tissue.

    It was cute that Harry thought it was all a joke though, and even in the middle of his...rant-of-denial shall we call it(?), he corrects himself ("Snape and I- uh...Professor Snape")

    Author's Response:

    Aw, better get a box!! There's more angst to come, before the story ends.

     

    Well, it is so out there, that Harry thought that it must be a joke!

Title: Chapter 5: Say what? 01 Dec 2009 11:34 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very cleverly done, when I read the summary I thought it would be very hard to do in a believable way but this chapter really brought everything together and you pulled it off realistically and beautifully.

    Author's Response: Thank you. It was a little tricky, but I'm glad that you thought that it was believable.
Title: Chapter 4: Retribution--Moody Style 01 Dec 2009 11:22 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww don't you just love Remus? I think he's so sweet, he's so gentle and caring. I think you portrayed him perfectly. This fic is going really well so far!

    Author's Response: Yes, Remus is sweet. I love how gentle and kind he is, and he always genuinely cared about Harry. Thanks Angel.
Title: Chapter 3: A Broken Dream, A Broken Mirror 01 Dec 2009 11:20 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    The last line was so sad! Poor Harry. I loved how Dudley was the one who stopped Vernon, and he was so nice to Harry. It just supports my belief that there is good in all people.

    Author's Response: Yeah, poor Harry, but at least his cousin is finally showing some sign of being human.  I'm glad that Dudley is rejecting his horrible parents teachings, and starting to think for himself.  I believe that everyone has good in them also.
Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 01 Dec 2009 11:18 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    You portray Severus so well. The Headmaster makes me laugh, because he is so utterly Albus Dumbledore.

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I appreciate that. Snape's character is very challenging to write at times. You want to keep him in character but have him grow as well. It is a very diffulct feat indeed.

     

    Chuckle chuckle. Yeah, Albus is very Albus...lemon drops and all.

Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 01 Dec 2009 11:14 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start, Pandora! I'm really looking forward to the rest of this, it's lovely to see that it's finished so I can read it all at once.

    Author's Response: Oh thank you Angel. I really wanted it to be finished before I posted it, so that it would flow better, but I was worried that it was too rushed.
Title: Chapter 3: A Broken Dream, A Broken Mirror 01 Dec 2009 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Scary! Scary! Poor Harry! His uncle is awful, but I found that he was much more in character being stopped by Dudley then in other stories where he just beats Harry to a pulp. Dudley defending Harry was unusual, but a GREAT change from the usual. I am actually really glad for Dudley. it seems that he is becoming more like Lily Potter to me, which is nice to see. I hope that harry can find some relief soon! Good chapter. :)

    Author's Response:

    Vernon is just very frustrated right now. Things are not going well for him at work, and he's taking it out on Harry. Also, he really didn't like feeling out of control by having  Moody and the others threaten him. Oh thank you. I really thought since I read the last book, that Dudley has some redeemable qualities and I like when he changes too. Yes, he does have Lily's blood in him, doesn't?  It's finally coming through.

     

    Thanks for reviewing Jan, and again...great job on  your latest chappie of Muggleville and I'm just dying for the next one!

Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 01 Dec 2009 10:36 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Ouu, good start! Interesting potions and what Voldemort hopes to do...

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Voldemort's plans are extremely evil!
Title: Chapter 4: Retribution--Moody Style 01 Dec 2009 9:57 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank goodness the Order members came when they did! I'm so glad that they showed up in time to rescue Harry and loved protective Moody!

    Yes, those were very fitting changes for Petunia and Vernon, though maybe even that was letting them off easily. I have to hope that poor Dudley won't have a heart attack when he sees his parents in the morning, lol!

    Wonderful job!

    Author's Response:

    Well...Dumbledore did send the order members to fetch Harry for a reason!  But yes, they showed up in the nick of time. Yeah, the real Moody is great. not at all like the fake one in Harry's fourth year.

     

    Hee hee!  Yeah, they did get off easily, but Moody didn't want Harry to feel responsible for even more pain, and there is still a child involved. Dudley needs his parents, as awful as they are.

     

    Yeah, Dudley might just have a good laugh in the morning.

     

    Thanks Kristeh.


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