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Title: Chapter 3: A Broken Dream, A Broken Mirror 01 Dec 2009 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad to see that Dudley has had a change of heart and that he came to Harry's rescue. I have a soft spot for the cousins learning to get along. Vernon is nasty as always, isn't he? What a despicable man!

    I feel so badly for Harry, having to deal with his pain and grief all alone. Hopefully, that will change soon.

    Great job again!

    Author's Response:

    I think that Dudley had a reality check when the Dementors came after him, the previous summer, and now he's feeling really beholden to Harry, and guilty as well.

     

    Vernon is truly a nasty piece of work, and doesn't deserve Harry.

     

    Harry is having a rough time now, but he's got his friends and he will soon have more than he could ever have wished for. It will be a rocky road there though.

     

    Thanks so much Kristeh. 

Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 01 Dec 2009 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    It's always good to see Harry with his friends. I loved their interactions and their concern and protectiveness.

    Of course we all knew Albus would have his way...when has he ever not? The man is truly a genius at getting his own way, isn't he? People say that Severus is the consummate Slytherin, but I actually think Albus can out-Slytherin even him, lol.

    Great chapter again!

    Author's Response:

    Harry's friends have always been a pillar of support for him, and they are very special to Harry. He would not make a serious move in  his life or make any seirous life-changing decision whithout their input.

     

    Albus IS very manipulative, yes.  Hmm..Dumbledore must have tricked the hat, I think.

     

    Thanks Kristeh. Can't wait for SC!!!

Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 01 Dec 2009 9:46 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved the beginning, Pandora! The opening scene with Voldemort and Severus at the Death Eater meeting was so tense and creepily evocative.

    Great line from Severus when he told Albus that everytime he hears him out, he lives to regret it.

    Can't wait to see how Albus plans to thwart Voldemort's scheme and how it involves Harry and Severus. Knowing that it involves a potion and a connection between fathers and sons, I have my suspicions!

    Author's Response:

    Oh thank you Kristeh.  Vodemort is a creepy guy all right!!

     

    Yes, Dumbledore always has plans within plans, doesn't he?

     

    The solution is going to be every bit as difficult as the problem.  Harry and Severus are in for a rough ride alright. You are very perceptive Kristeh.


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