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Reviews For A Dangerous Game
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 27 Apr 2014 4:08 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 9: The Best Laid Plans 21 Jan 2014 6:38 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wondered when Voldemort would demand the potion. It's just a matter of time till he realizes that it was not correct.
Title: Chapter 8: Bound by Blood Ties 21 Jan 2014 6:26 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    They seem to be starting to accept each other. Reluctantly, but it's a start.
Title: Chapter 5: Say what? 21 Jan 2014 2:52 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Sounds like a good idea on paper. Two powerful wizards united. But Snape and Harry? This should be interesting.
Title: Chapter 4: Retribution--Moody Style 21 Jan 2014 2:42 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad they didn't do anything to Dudley. He, at least, was concerned about Harry. Dudley will be in for a chock when he wakes up though.

    Author's Response: Well, they got off easy at least.  Hee Hee Poor Dudders!
Title: Chapter 3: A Broken Dream, A Broken Mirror 19 Jan 2014 7:09 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Compassionate Dudley was a nice twist. Harry did save his life and I'm glad to see that he is working on repaying Harry in his own way.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. Thought I would just give a twist to the usual.
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 19 Jan 2014 6:53 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder why Severus was required to give his blood? It was a nice beginning and left me wanting to know what is coming next.
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 26 Dec 2009 2:09 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Harry finally has what he has always longed for, a parent that loves and cares for him. Someone who will do anything to protect him.

    Author's Response: Oh thanks. Yeah, it took awhile to get there, but Snape will be there for Harry in a way that no one else has ever been.  Yes, and he would even die to protect Harry.
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 22 Dec 2009 7:55 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "I will not use my new and improved super powers to conspire with the evil medi-witch, Madame Pompfrey, to imprison my Professsor and father, against his will in this dreadful hospital wing."- Best. Line. EVER!! I laughed so hard I think I woke everyone up in the house! XD That whole section of Severus trying to sneak out was just brilliant!! XD I'm still giggling looking at it! Brilliant!

    And phew! I thought Sev was a goner for a minute, especially when Dumbledore just said they couldn't help Snape. Yay super powers! lol And the end with the birthday party, well that was adorable. Yays Snape! The last line was perfect.

    Fantastic story, Pandora! Sorry it took so long to read it, but it was amazing. I enjoyed it lots! :D

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee! Thanks. Yeah, Sev does NOT like being an invalid, or feeling helpless.

     

    Harry got angry and saved Severus. I think that both our boys are starting to care for each other more than they'd like to admit.

     Thanks Ivy. I'm so honoured that you took the time to not only read the story, you actually reviewed each chappie. Thanks so much.

Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 22 Dec 2009 7:36 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    CUTE!! XD Harry and Snape are getting along! YAYS! I did like it when Snape would yell at Harry and then be all "Did you eat?" That made me smile. And the whole letter bit, I thought Harry was going to get it then. But luckily that potion had really started to work because I bet old Snape wouldn't have cared overly much if he laid into the boy a little. Phew! Harry was lucky there! And seeing Harry and Snape getting along, even having a- dare I say- heart to heart was just beautiful. But I did find a little mistake. The very last word you added a "g" to Slytherin. No worries though. (I do that all the time while typing) Brilliant chappie!! :D

    Author's Response:

    Oops, I'lll go fix the g on Slytherin. Thanks for pointing that out.

     

    Yeah, I think that Snape (dare I say it) is mellowing out a bit Hee hee!  Yeah, heart to heart, and I just used YOUR expression.

     

    Yeah, Snape is finding it hard to maintain his anger, because he keeps feeling the need to care and protect Harry, and although he would deny it, it's not just the potion making him feeling that way.



    Author's Response:

    Oops, I'lll go fix the g on Slytherin. Thanks for pointing that out.

     

    Yeah, I think that Snape (dare I say it) is mellowing out a bit Hee hee!  Yeah, heart to heart, and I just used YOUR expression.

     

    Yeah, Snape is finding it hard to maintain his anger, because he keeps feeling the need to care and protect Harry, and although he would deny it, it's not just the potion making him feeling that way.


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