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Reviews For A Dangerous Game
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 04 Dec 2009 6:42 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I liked that so much! Great fic!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks PG!! I can't believe that you reviewed every chappie, that was really nice.
Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 04 Dec 2009 6:33 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, is time for the big finale! I can't wait!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yeah....coming up!!
Title: Chapter 9: The Best Laid Plans 04 Dec 2009 6:19 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hooray for Severus being concerned about Harry! I'm starting to hope for a happy ending...I could be wrong though. For a while, I had a sneaking suspicion that Severus would die once Harry had finally come to accept him as a guardian. I think I'll be upset if it happens now--I'm growing rather fond of this Snape.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Aw, c'mon, I love sappy endings. I can't resist.

     

    You don't honestly think that I'm that evil. Even the EDQ wouldn't do that!! Yeah, I'm fond of old Snapey-poo too. (Please don't tell him that I said that!)

     

     



    Author's Response:

    Aw, c'mon, I love sappy endings. I can't resist.

     

    You don't honestly think that I'm that evil. Even the EDQ wouldn't do that!! Yeah, I'm fond of old Snapey-poo too. (Please don't tell him that I said that!)

     

     

Title: Chapter 8: Bound by Blood Ties 04 Dec 2009 6:01 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Harry's reactions to Snape's kindness! He's so confused that Severus is giving him what he needs when the Dursley's didn't. I also enjoyed the part where Snape storms up to Harry's room to berate him for being late, then backs down when he realizes all that the boy has been through.

    I'm really enjoying this fic!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry was very confused over his own conflicting emotions.  Severus may be a reserved man, who keeps his emotions close to the chest, but he'd never physically abuse a child, even though he hasn't been above psychologically abusing one. He's always made excuses for his own maltreatment of Harry, but now he's forced to examine his own shortcomings and really see Harry for who he is. He's had to admit that Harry is not all he thought that he was. He's had to admit that the boy has been though hell and back, and some of it was at Snape's own hands.

     

    Severus is determined to make up for it, without giving up his pride. Not an easy feat!

     

    Thank you P.G.

Title: Chapter 7: Stand By Your Side 04 Dec 2009 5:42 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy... I can't wait to see how the potion influences them. I wonder if Harry's opinion of Snape will change...

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I think that Dumbledore was hoping that the potion would force them to really see deep inside of each other, but the hard work is for each of them to let go of their pre-conceptions of each other.
Title: Chapter 6: At Odds 04 Dec 2009 4:22 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, you had to go and make me sad...:( That dream was really depressing. But, maybe the potion will have the desired effects after all. I guess we'll see...

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Sorry, but on a brighter note...I've been giving out free boxes of tissues!!

     

    Don't fear PG, poor Harry will soon have everything he ever wanted. While he can't bring back Sirius, he'll finally have the father figure he deserves.

Title: Chapter 5: Say what? 04 Dec 2009 4:08 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Somehow, this seems like a bad idea. I imagine Harry is about to go ape-nuts on Dumbley, and with good reason. Who's to say this will actually help Snape and Harry? I'm not sure that it will provide the results your manipulative Dumbledore is after.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Aw, but Dumbleydore has plans, within plans doesn't he?  The greater good and all that... But I really do think that he wants these two to put aside their differences, and he really does care about both of them, and he is very old and although positively barmey, he is brilliant!  He knows things about this potion that Harry doesn't.  Also, he knows how much Severus loved Lily, and that with just a little push, that maybe he'll care about her son as well.
Title: Chapter 4: Retribution--Moody Style 04 Dec 2009 3:56 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha! "You can't just turn Muggles into farm animals at will!" I love it! I also really enjoyed seeing Dudley's more caring side. Spoiled or not, I think he'd have a hard time ignoring that sort of abuse going on in the household. I mean, who knows? If his father is willing to do that to Harry, he could possibly also do it to him if he made a big enough mistake.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    The abuse part was hard to write, but I had a lot of fun turning Vernon and Petunia into farm animals. I just thought that Moody is crazy enough to do something like that, and Kingsley is the voice of calm reason, with his deep, soothing voice. I find Kingsley  sexy in the moviies!

     

    I think that you are exactly right about Dudley. I'm sure that that was flashing through his mind. How horrifying to see your own father treat your family that way, and ever since the incident with the Dementors, Dudley has really been doing some soul searching, and not liking what he's seeing. After all...he's done some of his OWN abuse towards Harry, hasn't he?

Title: Chapter 3: A Broken Dream, A Broken Mirror 04 Dec 2009 3:22 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    This is my favorite chapter so far, mainly because of the lush descriptions. I love the moments where you know Vernon is coming, but he's not there yet. Harry's panic was horrifically real, right down to his owl going nuts. Great job--beautifully written.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. I'm happy that I succeeded in creating that fear inside of Harry.  I think that Hedwig is very protectivie of Harry, and that Vernon is very lucky that she was locked in her cage, otherwise I think that Hedwig would have pecked him!

     

    Thank you so much PG!!

Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 04 Dec 2009 2:57 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that we don't even know what he's agreeing to yet--way to keep the suspense going!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Oh thanks. You're going to be shocked when you find out!! I know that Harry was !

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