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Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 04 Dec 2009 2:25 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh, why do I have a bad feeling about this?

    Author's Response: Because you are very intuitive! :)
Title: Chapter 5: Say what? 03 Dec 2009 12:36 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    O.o Well, I kinda did, but didn't see that one coming. Dumbles would really do that? Even after watching Snape and Harry bickering right before him? Old coot! But at least it makes for a great story! ^_^ This is really getting good! I'd read more, but I gotta go now. Another fantastic chappie Pandora! Have a cookie! :D

    Author's Response:

    Mmmm...thanks for the yummy cookie.

     

    Dumbles is a master manipulator.  But he really does want the best for his "boys", and he knows that if Harry and Snape can let go of their hatred for one another, then they'll make  a great team--maybe even more.

     

    Thanks Ivy. BTW, what kind of cookie was that?

Title: Chapter 4: Retribution--Moody Style 03 Dec 2009 12:08 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    HAHAHA!! XD Moody turned them into farm animals! HAHAHAHAHA!!! XD Bet Petunia's not as cute as my little donkey! My little jenny's dark gray and adorable. ^_^

    But Harry needs to work on his lying skills...he's pretty bad here. lol Poor kid. But thank goodness people came to save him! Vernon's such an arse. >_< But yay they're taking him to Hogwart! :D I'll have to go on now as I'm curious. Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Aw!! You have a donkey as a pet?  Too cute. No, Petunia is definitely not as cute.  Your little Jenny sounds adorable.

     

    Harry is not a very good liar at times, that is true. I'm glad for once that his rescuers can see through them though, so they can take him away from there.  Yep, they're taking Harry to Hogwarts...but for how long will he remain there? Hee hee, mysterious, evil chuckle.

     

     

     

Title: Chapter 3: A Broken Dream, A Broken Mirror 02 Dec 2009 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Poor Harry! I hate nightmares, and Harry's are the absolute worst kind! And then to wake up to your uncle coming to beat the snot out of you...that's just terrible. But THANK GOODNESS Dudley, of all people, was there. I'm glad SOMEONE realized how terrible they'd been to Harry. Poor kid didn't need the abuse...And the end was very powerful, at least to me. I liked it very very much! :D

    I did find a little mistake I think: "Harry couldn't help but wonder who this caring and considerate stranger was, and what he had he done" I think you added an extra "he" or maybe I just can't read today...oh well. 'Nother wonderful chappie!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, poor Harry. Having nightmares is bad enough, but then to have Vernon treat you like cow dung isn't fun.  Yeah, I think that there is hope yet for Dudley. Thanks Ivy.

     

    I fixed the two "hes" Thatnks for pointing that out.  Thanks.

Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 02 Dec 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh...whatever Dumbles has planned, if Severus doesn't like it then I'm sure Harry will not like it either! Poor Harry. I did feel sorry for him. It's terrible to lose someone close to you like that. And I did feel sorry for Sev too about how he'd never really be free... That's it, I'm going on to the next chappie! Another good one Pandora! :D

    Author's Response:

    Well, they're both going into this situation with low expectations, so maybe it'll all work out better than they hoped.Yes, poor Harry; he's had a really rough time of it. Sirius' death has really hit him hard.

    Severus has been carrying a lot of guilt around with him.  He needs to forgive himself. Protecting Harry is his way of making amends.

     

    Thanks Ivy! I loved your chappie by the way. Love that story!

Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 02 Dec 2009 3:59 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, such a lovely ending. I was disappointed that Voldemort stayed alive, though. But the birthday party definitely made up for it. :) I'm so happy for Harry. And Snape, of course, the old grouch. ;)

    Very nice story that needs a sequel. Badly. ;)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Ramelia. I left Voldie alive, because I want to eventually write more of this uiniverse, or a side-story. I had to keep it short for the fest, but I got carried away with the relationship, and then I had to end it!!

     

    I'm happy for Harry and Snape the grouch.

     

    I will definitely think about a sequel. I miss writing the story now, and I feel that there are many unanswered questions.

Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 02 Dec 2009 3:49 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    There's only one thing to say: aw. :) And this place was so perfectly Snape-ish: "This conversation had been just a tad too personal for his liking, and he'd had his quota of sappy emotion-filled conversation for a lifetime." Wonderful, that.

    I'm so glad Snape is finally accepting Harry, and Harry on his part finds out a bit more about Lily's relationship with Severus.

    Very, very nice chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I love a Snapey-Snape!

     

    It's not easy for Snape to talk about Lily...especially to Harry. That is a big sign that things are changing between them.

     

    Thanks.

Title: Chapter 9: The Best Laid Plans 02 Dec 2009 3:37 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice idea to bring Remus in. Maybe he can help those two see each other for what they truly are, not just a 'greasy git' and 'Potter's spawn'. Though I guess they're slowly coming to accept each other, aren't they? The idea of 'concerned Snape' made me chuckle, though. :)

    Good chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Remus is always the voice of calm, isn't he?

     

    Concerned Snape seems impossible, doesn't it? But alas...anything is possible in the land of fanfictiondom!

     

    Thanks Ramelia.

     

Title: Chapter 8: Bound by Blood Ties 02 Dec 2009 3:24 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    So, Snape is slowly coming around, is he? Good. I'm looking forward to the confrontation with Voldemort, though. And now Harry wants to avenge Sirius... Goodness awaits, methinks. :)

    Author's Response: Oh yest, this confrontation should be interesting to say the least.  Harry can't let go of his need for revenge, but perhaps he'll let go of this need, when he realises that he has Snape's support.  Perhaps the need for revenge will lessen as Harry feels some of his gried and anger leave him.
Title: Chapter 7: Stand By Your Side 02 Dec 2009 3:06 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Things are getting interesting... I can't wait to see how the bond will affect them both. That translates into: gimme some mushy hurt/comfort! :D

    Author's Response: Thanks. There are  many mushy/hurt/comfort moments to come, believe me!

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