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Reviews For A Dangerous Game
Author's Response: Because you are very intuitive! :)
Author's Response: Mmmm...thanks for the yummy cookie.
Dumbles is a master manipulator. But he really does want the best for his "boys", and he knows that if Harry and Snape can let go of their hatred for one another, then they'll make a great team--maybe even more.
Thanks Ivy. BTW, what kind of cookie was that?
But Harry needs to work on his lying skills...he's pretty bad here. lol Poor kid. But thank goodness people came to save him! Vernon's such an arse. >_< But yay they're taking him to Hogwart! :D I'll have to go on now as I'm curious. Great chapter! Author's Response: Aw!! You have a donkey as a pet? Too cute. No, Petunia is definitely not as cute. Your little Jenny sounds adorable.
Harry is not a very good liar at times, that is true. I'm glad for once that his rescuers can see through them though, so they can take him away from there. Yep, they're taking Harry to Hogwarts...but for how long will he remain there? Hee hee, mysterious, evil chuckle.
I did find a little mistake I think: "Harry couldn't help but wonder who this caring and considerate stranger was, and what he had he done" I think you added an extra "he" or maybe I just can't read today...oh well. 'Nother wonderful chappie! Author's Response: Yeah, poor Harry. Having nightmares is bad enough, but then to have Vernon treat you like cow dung isn't fun. Yeah, I think that there is hope yet for Dudley. Thanks Ivy.
I fixed the two "hes" Thatnks for pointing that out. Thanks.
Author's Response: Well, they're both going into this situation with low expectations, so maybe it'll all work out better than they hoped.Yes, poor Harry; he's had a really rough time of it. Sirius' death has really hit him hard. Severus has been carrying a lot of guilt around with him. He needs to forgive himself. Protecting Harry is his way of making amends.
Thanks Ivy! I loved your chappie by the way. Love that story!
Very nice story that needs a sequel. Badly. ;) Author's Response: Thanks Ramelia. I left Voldie alive, because I want to eventually write more of this uiniverse, or a side-story. I had to keep it short for the fest, but I got carried away with the relationship, and then I had to end it!!
I'm happy for Harry and Snape the grouch.
I will definitely think about a sequel. I miss writing the story now, and I feel that there are many unanswered questions.
I'm so glad Snape is finally accepting Harry, and Harry on his part finds out a bit more about Lily's relationship with Severus. Very, very nice chapter! Author's Response: Thanks, I love a Snapey-Snape!
It's not easy for Snape to talk about Lily...especially to Harry. That is a big sign that things are changing between them.
Thanks.
Good chapter. Author's Response: Remus is always the voice of calm, isn't he?
Concerned Snape seems impossible, doesn't it? But alas...anything is possible in the land of fanfictiondom!
Thanks Ramelia.
Author's Response: Oh yest, this confrontation should be interesting to say the least. Harry can't let go of his need for revenge, but perhaps he'll let go of this need, when he realises that he has Snape's support. Perhaps the need for revenge will lessen as Harry feels some of his gried and anger leave him.
Author's Response: Thanks. There are many mushy/hurt/comfort moments to come, believe me! |
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