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Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 02 Dec 2009 1:52 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I so loved this story. Sequel??? Maybe (puppy dog eyes)

    Author's Response:

    Oh thank you. I'm thinking about it. I love puppies.  :)

     

    I just can't promise when, as I've neglected my other stories. but I did plan on writing a side-story or a short sequel, as I was not able to explore Sev and Harry's relationship as I really wanted to, since I had a deadline to finish the story.

     

Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 02 Dec 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "Severus grit his teeth in irritation as he sneered at the doddering old wizard spewing nonsense from his aged pruned lips, as though he was handing out lemon drops and sugar quills to snot-nosed, spoilt brats." - I'm not sure what it was about this line, but it made me laugh! ^_^ I think it was the part about the "aged pruned lips" lol Yeah, that was great...

    But on my Pandora! This has got me VERY interested! And my little mind (yes little lol) is thinking up all kinds of possibilities as to what's going on here! I was a little sad, but not all that surprised about the lines talking about how Severus makes himself unattractive to women because he doesn't want to fall in love again. That made me sad...but that's probably part of the reason he really looked like that in the books...

    I am very interested in this Pandora! It was a very good start! I'll have to read later on when I'm not drowning in homework. (You see, I surfaced for a time to see what all I was missing) Expect more reviews from me later on!

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee, I really had an image in my mind, when I wrote that line. I could just imagine Snape thinking that!  Well, I was trying to think of a way that Snape could diss Albus about his age, and prunes just came to mind!

     

    Thanks Ivy, and you updated too, and it was a great chappie.  Aw, you'll have to keep on reading to find out.

     

    Severus never truly got over Lily, and o why bother to make himself attractive to other women, when no one can hold a candle to his soul mate?

     

    Thanks Ivy, don't worry about it. I am honoured that you took the time to review at all, when you are so busy. Thank you very much!

Title: Chapter 6: At Odds 02 Dec 2009 12:19 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the conversation between Harry and Dumbledore. Dumbledore obviously does care for Harry very much and I'm glad that he admitted that he was wrong to send Harry to the Dursleys and that he has no plans to send him back, whatever Harry decides.

    The ending is so sad. I do hope for both Harry and Severus that they can learn to care for one another.

    Author's Response:

    I think that Dumbledore never really realised how badly treated Harry was. He does really care for him, and I think that as half-baked as this plan of Dumbles is, that he really thinks that it will all come together for Harry and Snape, and they'll eventually learn to let their grudges go.

     

    Thanks Kristeh.

Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 02 Dec 2009 12:16 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    The last line was so cuuuute!!! *grabs tissue AGAIN*

    Lovely end to a lovely fic, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Great fest entry!

    Author's Response:

    Wow, I think that i've counted at least three boxes of kleenexes.  Here...I'll reimburse you. After all...it's my fault.

     

    Thank you Angel. You are so kind.  I hope that it wasn't too sappy and ending.

Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 02 Dec 2009 12:15 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry, Harry, Harry. You just can't resist temptation, can you?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Aw c'mon, he wouldn't be a Gryffindor if he liked to play it safe and obey the rules, now would he?

     

    Thanks.

Title: Chapter 5: Say what? 02 Dec 2009 12:11 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Dumbledore does have a clever idea...if Harry and Sev don't kill each other first!

    Voldemort's plan is so eerily and evilly clever. It's a scary thought to think of him with his invincible Death Eaters by his side, isn't it? Thank goodness Severus was the one to be necessary for the plot's success and that he is secretly working to sabotage it.

    Loved Remus, he's so gentle with Harry, but I have hope for Harry and Severus' relationship too...I hope. Harry does need to see that Severus is not to blame for Sirius' death, and Severus needs to admit his own misconceptions about Harry too.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Dumbledore's idea is brilliant, but outrageous.  I really hope too that Harry and Sev can make a little headway eventually, in their relationship.

     

    Voldemort is so evil, and slimy, isn't he?  What's really scary is that Voldemort's plan is just a little too close for comfort to Hitller's plan to create a perfect race. Very scary.

    I'm glad that Severus is there to sabotage it as well.

     

    I really love Remus too. It was really too bad in Canon that he could never take Harry in, because of his furry little problem, because  he really is a good guy.  You are right, Harry has to stop blaming Snape for Sirius' death; the only one responsible is Voldie.

     

    Snape has to see that Harry is not the boy that he thought that he was, and he will eventually.

Title: Chapter 9: The Best Laid Plans 02 Dec 2009 12:11 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    How could ANYONE even a deatheater allow that to happen to their children!? *shudders*

    Well written though!

    Author's Response: I think that they're too scared to go against Voldie.  Thanks.
Title: Chapter 8: Bound by Blood Ties 02 Dec 2009 12:06 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    You characterise Snape and Harry so well, I think it's so sad that Harry just wants to do this for Bellatrix, to get revenge for Sirius. *runs off to get another tissue*

    Author's Response: Thanks. Are you running out of kleenex yet? LOL! Yeah, it is sad, isn't it?  Harry can't think of anything but revenge at this point, but he will will get some rewards that he wasn't expecting out of this "arrangement".
Title: Chapter 7: Stand By Your Side 02 Dec 2009 12:03 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL!! I can tell that this is going to work out 'well'! Brilliant chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks Angel. It's going to be tough, but it's going to come together...eventually.
Title: Chapter 2: Like a Dagger to the Heart 02 Dec 2009 12:03 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Ron's character a lot in this chapter. Dumbledore is really pulling Snape's heart string with that last comment, isn't he?

    Author's Response: Oh thanks Jan. I love to write Ron too. He comes out with some good lines at times. He's so fun to write.  Yeah Dumbledore is really manipulative, and he knows just how to draw Snape in, hook, line and sinker.

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