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Title: Simple Gifts 05 Aug 2014 9:37 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    So cool how you pieced their separate stories together! Can't wait to see what will happen next, :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have a lot planned for them.
Title: Simple Gifts 23 May 2013 10:58 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    That song always makes me cry when I hear it at Christmas. Interesting story so far!
Title: Simple Gifts 09 Jan 2012 6:54 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this was so very cute

    Author's Response: Aww thanks! 
Title: Simple Gifts 08 Apr 2011 2:46 am
Reviewer: ms-out-of-clever-pen-names (Signed) [Report This]
    promising :)
    cant wait to read the rest!

    Author's Response: aww thanks!
Title: Simple Gifts 05 Jan 2010 3:44 am
Reviewer: Wrinkled_Fabric (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! He bought him mittens! That's so awesome. Mean scary exDeatheaters aren't going to be very mean and scary if they continue buying small children Christmas presents! Loved the insight into Severus' childhood, it ties in perfectly with why he finds the need to buy gloves for a kid that reminds him of himself. Very awesome, subtle and brilliant. You are made of win! I so can't wait to see where this goes!
    I will be patiently awaiting an update :)

    Fabsx

    Author's Response: Thanks and I should *crosses fingers* have the next chapter up soon...life has been crazy but I'm glad that you liked it.
Title: Simple Gifts 13 Dec 2009 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Oh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice :D:D I like it :D

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on the next chapter, hopefully, it will be up soon.
Title: Simple Gifts 06 Dec 2009 6:34 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    That was nice. It felt very Christmas-ish and I loved that. It was rather unclear in the beginning that the little boy was Severus. My original assumption was that it was Harry, so you may want to try and make that clearer, sooner.

    But other than that, it was great! Your writing style is beautiful and I do love that song. ;-)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I understand what you meant that it was a unclear, but it was supposed to be. :-D Everything will be explained in later chapters. LOL, I trying not to use either boy's name. Thanks again and I hope that you like the next installment.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I understand what you meant that it was a unclear, but it was supposed to be. :-D Everything will be explained in later chapters. LOL, I trying not to use either boy's name. Thanks again and I hope that you like the next installment.
Title: Simple Gifts 06 Dec 2009 5:09 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it of course, but you already knew that. ;)

    I have to say this first chapter really put me in the Christmas spirit, even if Severus is rather grinchlike about the holiday. Maybe his mind will be changed by the end of the story.

    The little additions (phrases, words, etc.) I think made this chapter stronger when I reread it after you posted it. It brought the reader closer to the story and helped the emotions jump off the page.

    I can't wait 'til you have the next chapter ready for me. Well, my logical side says I need to get my own work done. *Hexes logical side into submission* lol. ;) I'm looking forward to it!

    Author's Response: Thanks Ella, I'm glad that you liked it again! Yeah, Severus is a grinch, but to be honest, his Christmases have probably been stolen from him a lot of times too  (get it? :-))  I hope to have the next chapter done soon, early next week. Thanks again for betaing and don't hex yourself too hard. LOL, "poor" Dumbly, I've still got my wand trained on him from your story, I hope Sev takes care of that problem soon! :-d Thanks again!
Title: Simple Gifts 05 Dec 2009 5:56 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    You made me cry......wonderful story. I look forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Aww sorry about making you cry but I'm glad that you like the story, I hope to have the next chapter up by Wenesday.
Title: Simple Gifts 05 Dec 2009 1:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!! I'm really impressed. This is very well written.

    I'm dying to see if that little boy is Harry Potter, and what Snape will do when he finds out that it is. What a nice thing for Snape to do.

    I'm really looking forward to your next chappie.

    Author's Response: Thank you! LOL, you'll have to see about that little boy, it will be revealed soon (maybe not next chapter, but soon). LOL, Snape's response to that child will be memorable. Thank you again and I hope to have the next chapter up by Wenesday.

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