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Reviews For Of Scarlet and Emerald
Author's Response: Aww thanks!
Your story seems to jump back and forth from present to future, and that makes it a little confusing. Also, sometimes you have these huge, long paragraphs that really need to be broken up. Readers see a huge chunk of text and go, 'oh boy' because eyes don't like to look at so many words lumped together. Other than that your story is coming along nicely! Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry about that. It's actually a ton better than it was earlier so that's good. :-)
It can't be bad reviews because this story is great! Hopefully points for Ravenclaw! Author's Response: Thank you! Points to Ravenclaw for getting the question correct! :-D Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing, I hope to have the next chapter up soon! -Autumn
Nicely written, and the cliffhanger is excellent! I'm an alumnus BTW. My condolences on the loss of your "Uncle" as well. Author's Response: Hey there, Thanks for reading and reviewing! Close on the fear, yes, I don't like heights all that much (except oddly roller coasters), close! Thanks again and I hope to have the next chapter up by the end of this week. Thanks again about my uncle! -Autumn
Author's Response: LOL, thanks for reading and reviewing! BTW, when will I see your story in my mailbox? :-D -Autumn
I love this story, please continue it, do not leave it here, that's just too cruel. Impatiently waiting for new chapter. Author's Response: LOL, I'm getting the vibe that a lot of you think I'm evil! I'm trying to update by the end of this week, we'll see. Thanks for reading and reviewing. -Autumn
Author's Response: I'm evil, am I? Well, MUHUHAHAH ! :-P Thanks for reading and reviewing. Close on the question, not quite, but close. I'm trying to write and have the next chapter up by the end of this week. :-D Thanks again! -Autumn
That's a evil point for a cliff hanger (the one of yours) I can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Harry! hope Madame Pomfrey will fix him soon! Author's Response: LOL thank you for reading and reviewing. I should have the next chapter up soon. It will take a lot for Harry to all better, but we shall see. :-D Thanks again! -Autumn
How could you leave us there though. Yikes. I hope that you're not killing off Harry already! LOL! Great chapter as usual, but now I'm very anxious for the next one. Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the chocolate cake! LOL, I feel *a bit* guilty about the cliffie, but at least that will motivate me to have the next chapter up soon (maybe a week or so). We'll have to see about Harry. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :-D -Autumn |
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