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Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 09 Jan 2012 7:20 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i have no idea derie, but i loved the chapter!

    Author's Response: Aww thanks! 
Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 06 Feb 2011 8:47 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    The only two criticisms I have are this:

    Your story seems to jump back and forth from present to future, and that makes it a little confusing.

    Also, sometimes you have these huge, long paragraphs that really need to be broken up. Readers see a huge chunk of text and go, 'oh boy' because eyes don't like to look at so many words lumped together.

    Other than that your story is coming along nicely!

    Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry about that. It's actually a ton better than it was earlier so that's good. :-)
Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 28 Jan 2010 12:50 am
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I am taking a guess that your greatest fear is escalators.

    It can't be bad reviews because this story is great!

    Hopefully points for Ravenclaw!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Points to Ravenclaw for getting the question correct! :-D Great job!
Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 25 Jan 2010 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for a great chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing, I hope to have the next chapter up soon! -Autumn
Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 24 Jan 2010 11:46 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I would say that your worst fear was heights (or falling from them).

    Nicely written, and the cliffhanger is excellent!

    I'm an alumnus BTW.

    My condolences on the loss of your "Uncle" as well.

    Author's Response: Hey there, Thanks for reading and reviewing! Close on the fear, yes, I don't like heights all that much (except oddly roller coasters), close! Thanks again and I hope to have the next chapter up by the end of this week. Thanks again about my uncle! -Autumn
Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 24 Jan 2010 3:26 pm
Reviewer: LaileeJane (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, Harry's hurt! I know that's not a normal response, lol, but now he has to be made better again. :)

    Author's Response: LOL, thanks for reading and reviewing! BTW, when will I see your story in my mailbox? :-D -Autumn
Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 24 Jan 2010 4:23 am
Reviewer: kazetoame (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! That was horrendously EVIL of you!!!! Update NOW!

    I love this story, please continue it, do not leave it here, that's just too cruel.

    Impatiently waiting for new chapter.

    Author's Response: LOL, I'm getting the vibe that a lot of you think I'm evil! I'm trying to update by the end of this week, we'll see. Thanks for reading and reviewing. -Autumn
Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 24 Jan 2010 12:57 am
Reviewer: Mica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    your EEEEEEEEVIL!!! (and possibly scared of lifts braking? if so i can sooooo relate)next chapie NOW please!!! I'm a Hufflepuff by the way!

    Author's Response:

    I'm evil, am I? Well, MUHUHAHAH ! :-P Thanks for reading and reviewing. Close on the question, not quite, but close. I'm trying to write and have the next chapter up by the end of this week. :-D Thanks again!  -Autumn

Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 23 Jan 2010 11:16 pm
Reviewer: Chandramas (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!! That's a cliff hanger... (well before he fell I mean...) I think Severus soon or later will take point for that fall too.

    That's a evil point for a cliff hanger (the one of yours) I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Poor Harry! hope Madame Pomfrey will fix him soon!

    Author's Response: LOL thank you for reading and reviewing. I should have the next chapter up soon. It will take  a lot for Harry to all better, but we shall see. :-D Thanks again! -Autumn
Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 23 Jan 2010 4:23 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yum Chocolate cake.

    How could you leave us there though. Yikes.

    I hope that you're not killing off Harry already! LOL!

    Great chapter as usual, but now I'm very anxious for the next one.

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the chocolate cake! LOL, I feel *a bit* guilty about the cliffie, but at least that will motivate me to have the next chapter up soon (maybe a week or so). We'll have to see about Harry. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :-D -Autumn

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