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Title: Mocks the Song 25 May 2011 8:23 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Wait- so is he quadraplegic or paraplegic? You mentioned both the C spine and the T spine- which one was the place of nerve damange/paralisis? You mentioned that the C spine injurry was what caused him to stop breathing; was that due to nerve damage or just the position of his head?

    Author's Response: He's a paraplegic. The cervical vertabrea (in the neck) was twisted to a 9o degree angle whereas the one in the lower back was broken. I based part of it (the neck being 90 degrees twisted) on an injury my sister had in 1994 (though she broken another bone in her neck as well but not her back). Harry stopped breathing due to shock from his injuries and the position of his injuries. 
Title: Mocks the Song 28 Jul 2010 1:32 pm
Reviewer: Kaona (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like your style of writing. This is awesome! I hope to see an update soon :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! :-D There will be an update in about two weeks. My beta is in London at the moment, but after she gets back and recovered from the time difference/caught up in work, I'll send it to her.
Title: Mocks the Song 03 Jun 2010 11:18 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I would guess Hermione as she is September and would be one of the oldest in the class. Great chapter thank you

    Author's Response:

    Hey there,

     Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yep, you're correct about Hermione (9/19). Good job!

Title: Mocks the Song 01 Jun 2010 3:42 pm
Reviewer: Tabetha (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter and story. My only complaint would be that I would think if he was only paralyzed from the thighs down then that wouldn't effect bladder and bowel control as both are a little further up. I think those only get affected when its paralyzed from the waist up. But I could be wrong on that.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! No, I researched it, and breaks in the T section as well as the..."S" I think, could affect it. It's actually from the waist down, from my understanding and from experiences with a friend. I really do appreciate that you read and reviewed though, it means a lot to me. Have a great day and hope that you will continue to read and review S&E. :-D
Title: Mocks the Song 31 May 2010 7:40 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    1) I Heard the Bells on Christmas Day
    2) By Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
    3) Hermione Granger, September 19th

    Hope I got one right at least, btw I'm a Slytherin.

    Poor Harry, I had a weird feeling as you described him and the halo. Especially about the screws, I think it's horrendously painful to have that, I wonder why they haven't invented a better way other then screws into the skull.

    Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing. congrats, you are the first to correctly answer all the questions. yeah, i had a hard time with the halo but wizards haven't invented anything better for the job than muggles. the real way is to put screws in patients' necks. it's horrifying but that's what happens, my sis had to have it done. scary business...and the fact they kept her awake for the procedure bc the general anstesia would have mixed with the hyperthermia they were treating her for....anyways, thanks again.
Title: Mocks the Song 30 May 2010 9:33 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's really late, but I think you got the title from "I hear the Christmas bells", originally a poem by longfellar. Great chapter, please don't leave us hanging too long.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Yep, You got the questions correct! Great job! :-D I'm going to hopefully be able to work on it some this week. :-D -Autumn
Title: Mocks the Song 30 May 2010 6:50 am
Reviewer: Periwinkle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well... It did say Physical Impairment on the Fic warning list, and I am a Ravenclaw. So yeah, I was pretty sure of some paralysis.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Mocks the Song 30 May 2010 2:41 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Man! That was such a sad, grim chapter. Poor Harry. Your medical info is wonderfully detailed, as are the emotional reactions of both Harry and Severus. So sad-- little Harry fantasizing about how much he'd like a hug from Molly. I hope the next chapter brings a bit of hope to everyone, especially Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for reading and reviewing, it means A LOT to me! Thank you also about the medical info-that took me ages to sort out (I already knew a lot and the type of nexk injury I gave Harry, my sister had-"Hangman's Fracture-" but it was hard to research, knowing what could have happened to her. I'll pass on the comment about Harry wanting a hug-Ella suggested I do that. Things will look grim, but that sun will rise again. LOL-you commented ealier that I'm afraid of loud noises but love thunderstorms as inspiration...maybe that's not such a great idea. So far (in differing fandoms) I have a kid paralayzed (SE obviously), a kid with cancer (which I really ought to finish...sigh), a kid who commits suicide (written after a friend and co-worker did the deed), and one about a school shooting (in remembrance of VATech)...Yeah, I haven't been able to write a really happy story at all yet...lol. Thanks again for the review.

Title: Mocks the Song 30 May 2010 12:37 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter!!! Poor, poor, poor Harry! Darn it, I can't answer any of the questions though. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It's fine about the questions, they're a bit hard. Hopefully the next chapter won't take long to write.

Title: Mocks the Song 30 May 2010 12:33 am
Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't know the song, but I do know the birthday--well, a guess-- September 19th, and Hermione Granger.

    This one hit home as well... My friend is paralyzed. But there's a chance that she'll walk again.

    Author's Response: Good job on the birthday, Yep, I share Hermoine's birthday September 19th. I'm praying for your friend. I know we were all terrified when we learned that Heather may never walk again, but thankfully, she did. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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