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Title: Weaving a Web of Despair 06 Feb 2011 9:00 am
Reviewer: lyda29 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am so glad we have another chapter to enjoy. I really like your story. Harry's strength comes from his enduring all the abuse heaped on him. He will rise above this horrible injury.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  

Title: A Not so Peaceful Night 06 Feb 2011 8:47 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    The only two criticisms I have are this:

    Your story seems to jump back and forth from present to future, and that makes it a little confusing.

    Also, sometimes you have these huge, long paragraphs that really need to be broken up. Readers see a huge chunk of text and go, 'oh boy' because eyes don't like to look at so many words lumped together.

    Other than that your story is coming along nicely!

    Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry about that. It's actually a ton better than it was earlier so that's good. :-)
Title: Weaving a Web of Despair 06 Feb 2011 8:28 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Awe!!! Aut!!!!

    Wonderful Aut! I love it! I feel so bad for Harry!

    I loved Snape in the Slytherin Dorm! LOL I could so see that happening!

    Excellent work Aut!

    Author's Response: Aww thanks DOA, lol I told you I would have it up on Saturday and at 11:30 pm it went up. Thanks about the scene...There will be a special little question for the litterboxers. 
Title: Weaving a Web of Despair 06 Feb 2011 6:58 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon.

    Author's Response: LOL, I'll try. The next chapter is planned. I have to finish my fest fic before I start on a new chapter. :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Presently Remembering Christmas Past 05 Feb 2011 1:07 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah.... You had me hooked from the first chapter!! I'm glad Snape finally remembered who Harry was and hopefully Harry will realize who Snape is eventually. So is Snape going to take him in? What is that little bit about the Death Eaters' sperm? Can't wait to read more!!

    Author's Response: Aww thanks!
Title: Mocks the Song 28 Jul 2010 1:32 pm
Reviewer: Kaona (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like your style of writing. This is awesome! I hope to see an update soon :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! :-D There will be an update in about two weeks. My beta is in London at the moment, but after she gets back and recovered from the time difference/caught up in work, I'll send it to her.
Title: Mocks the Song 03 Jun 2010 11:18 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I would guess Hermione as she is September and would be one of the oldest in the class. Great chapter thank you

    Author's Response:

    Hey there,

     Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yep, you're correct about Hermione (9/19). Good job!

Title: Mocks the Song 01 Jun 2010 3:42 pm
Reviewer: Tabetha (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter and story. My only complaint would be that I would think if he was only paralyzed from the thighs down then that wouldn't effect bladder and bowel control as both are a little further up. I think those only get affected when its paralyzed from the waist up. But I could be wrong on that.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! No, I researched it, and breaks in the T section as well as the..."S" I think, could affect it. It's actually from the waist down, from my understanding and from experiences with a friend. I really do appreciate that you read and reviewed though, it means a lot to me. Have a great day and hope that you will continue to read and review S&E. :-D
Title: Mocks the Song 31 May 2010 7:40 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    1) I Heard the Bells on Christmas Day
    2) By Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
    3) Hermione Granger, September 19th

    Hope I got one right at least, btw I'm a Slytherin.

    Poor Harry, I had a weird feeling as you described him and the halo. Especially about the screws, I think it's horrendously painful to have that, I wonder why they haven't invented a better way other then screws into the skull.

    Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing. congrats, you are the first to correctly answer all the questions. yeah, i had a hard time with the halo but wizards haven't invented anything better for the job than muggles. the real way is to put screws in patients' necks. it's horrifying but that's what happens, my sis had to have it done. scary business...and the fact they kept her awake for the procedure bc the general anstesia would have mixed with the hyperthermia they were treating her for....anyways, thanks again.
Title: Mocks the Song 30 May 2010 9:33 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's really late, but I think you got the title from "I hear the Christmas bells", originally a poem by longfellar. Great chapter, please don't leave us hanging too long.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Yep, You got the questions correct! Great job! :-D I'm going to hopefully be able to work on it some this week. :-D -Autumn

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