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Reviews For Of Scarlet and Emerald
Author's Response: Thank you!
Your story seems to jump back and forth from present to future, and that makes it a little confusing. Also, sometimes you have these huge, long paragraphs that really need to be broken up. Readers see a huge chunk of text and go, 'oh boy' because eyes don't like to look at so many words lumped together. Other than that your story is coming along nicely! Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry about that. It's actually a ton better than it was earlier so that's good. :-)
Wonderful Aut! I love it! I feel so bad for Harry! I loved Snape in the Slytherin Dorm! LOL I could so see that happening! Excellent work Aut! Author's Response: Aww thanks DOA, lol I told you I would have it up on Saturday and at 11:30 pm it went up. Thanks about the scene...There will be a special little question for the litterboxers.
Author's Response: LOL, I'll try. The next chapter is planned. I have to finish my fest fic before I start on a new chapter. :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: Aww thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! :-D There will be an update in about two weeks. My beta is in London at the moment, but after she gets back and recovered from the time difference/caught up in work, I'll send it to her.
Author's Response: Hey there, Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yep, you're correct about Hermione (9/19). Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! No, I researched it, and breaks in the T section as well as the..."S" I think, could affect it. It's actually from the waist down, from my understanding and from experiences with a friend. I really do appreciate that you read and reviewed though, it means a lot to me. Have a great day and hope that you will continue to read and review S&E. :-D
2) By Henry Wadsworth Longfellow 3) Hermione Granger, September 19th Hope I got one right at least, btw I'm a Slytherin. Poor Harry, I had a weird feeling as you described him and the halo. Especially about the screws, I think it's horrendously painful to have that, I wonder why they haven't invented a better way other then screws into the skull. Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing. congrats, you are the first to correctly answer all the questions. yeah, i had a hard time with the halo but wizards haven't invented anything better for the job than muggles. the real way is to put screws in patients' necks. it's horrifying but that's what happens, my sis had to have it done. scary business...and the fact they kept her awake for the procedure bc the general anstesia would have mixed with the hyperthermia they were treating her for....anyways, thanks again.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Yep, You got the questions correct! Great job! :-D I'm going to hopefully be able to work on it some this week. :-D -Autumn |
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