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Title: Yuletide Fueds 17 Jan 2010 8:25 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh! I could kill Ron for doing that! Really, he's just as prejudiced as Malfoy!

    I'm looking forward to your next chapter and hope that you have no more family crises to deal with.

    Author's Response: Thanks, yeah, I've always seen a simularity between Malfoy and Ron. Thanks, I hope I have no more family crisis to deal with, but I have an uncle in hospice...so I shall see...Thanks again! :-D -Autumn
Title: Yuletide Fueds 17 Jan 2010 5:33 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the story.... Can't wait for more... Awww poor Harry his first ever gift destroyed because of the colour..

    p.s It's slytherin for me

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and reading! The next chapter should be out shortly. Yeah, I wasn't too pleased with Ron for destroying Harry's gift. Points to Slytherin! :-)
Title: Yuletide Fueds 17 Jan 2010 3:54 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor Harry. Ron's a real jerk in this huh (good for Hermione, I would've done a fair bit to him too for that. Jerk. Jerky jerkful jerk. Of jerkiness... yeah, you get my point ^^)
    I dont know if I've said it already but I love your writing style - your focus when it comes to the characters just always strikes me as really sweet, like one of those childhood stories that lasts forever and is always enjoyed... perhaps it's simply the way you write about snow and mittens and fireplaces and I really want a hot chocolate now... cookies go well with that (as do points for ravenclaw, what with it's nice toasty library common room and all ^-^)
    anyway, lovely chapter ^-^

    Author's Response: Yeah, poor Harry, I fear it's only going to get worse for him in the next chapter. Ron is a jerk and I think between Herimoine, and perhaps the twins, he'll pay the price. Thanks so much about the compliments about my writing style, it means so much to me! Here's some virtual hot chocolate (would you like marshmellows, whip creme and maybe a splash of caramel (my fave)?) Here's some points to Ravenclaw! :-D
Title: Yuletide Fueds 17 Jan 2010 3:41 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This fic is great. I enjoy reading it very much.
    If I were Harry I would never forgive Ron for destroying something that was obviously precious to me.
    When will Snape remember giving the mittens to Harry? Please update as soon as you can.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate your comments! Yeah, Harry may have a hard time forgiving him-Herimoine for that matter as well, but I shall see...Snape will remember giving them, soon, but probably not in the next chapter, not sure. Thanks again!-Autumn
Title: Yuletide Fueds 17 Jan 2010 2:19 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I am looking forward to the next one.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, the next chapter will be up soon!
Title: Yuletide Fueds 17 Jan 2010 10:48 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    What a terrible thing for Ron to do! Who cares what color the mittens were, what mattered was what they meant to Harry. Ron needs to learn a lesson.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Ron's a duffus in my story, but I think he'll learn his lesson sooner or later. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Yuletide Fueds 17 Jan 2010 8:14 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, yay. I was wondering when you were going to post this. I like the new additions. It brings more action to the story, and I noticed you worked on correcting the POV switches. I'm happy to see you took my comment about switching when Sev thought about the mittens. It was definitely better placed there, and it worked out very well.

    I don't really know what else to say since I commented a bunch already. lol. ;) I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see what you have up your sleeve.

    Author's Response:

    Hey there,

     Thanks for reviewing and especially betaing! 50 points to Slytherin. Thanks again for bringing my attention to the POV problems, I hadn't even realized! " :-D

Title: Yuletide Fueds 17 Jan 2010 5:45 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Gryffindor Ma'am!

    Oh, poor Harry. I wonder if Snape'll figure out that he was the one that gave Harry the mittens.

    I guess that Harry remembers that it was Snape that gave them to him?

    Wonderful chappie Autumn. I can't wait for the next one. I love how you keep Snape so in character.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you and points to you as well!

    Yeah, Snape will figure out that he gave the mittens to Harry. No, Harry doesn't know it was Snape...atleast not yet...:-D And thanks! :-D

Title: Yuletide Fueds 17 Jan 2010 4:23 am
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    how sad. Sometimes i so dislike Ron. I hope Snape figures things out.

    Thanks for posting :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review . I'm not much of a Ron fan so it was rather easy to write him like that. Snape will figure things out before too long. :-)

Title: Simple Gifts 05 Jan 2010 3:44 am
Reviewer: Wrinkled_Fabric (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! He bought him mittens! That's so awesome. Mean scary exDeatheaters aren't going to be very mean and scary if they continue buying small children Christmas presents! Loved the insight into Severus' childhood, it ties in perfectly with why he finds the need to buy gloves for a kid that reminds him of himself. Very awesome, subtle and brilliant. You are made of win! I so can't wait to see where this goes!
    I will be patiently awaiting an update :)

    Fabsx

    Author's Response: Thanks and I should *crosses fingers* have the next chapter up soon...life has been crazy but I'm glad that you liked it.

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