| Title: Chapter 2
| 17 Dec 2018 1:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I’ve just found this story again and read the answer to my review! I’m so sorry I didn’t read it before and answer you. I think this story has great possibilities. The main idea is to decide if it should be a comedy with the boys, or just Harry, making mistakes and Severus getting mad and deciding weird punishments or, if he begins to understand their problems and past. Perhaps a mind healer could come and talk to them, he/she could be mad/bad and bring up areas they don’t want to visit leading to nightmares sleep walking ect. I think the main idea is to get Severus to interact with the boys. Hope this is not too late as I love this story
Snape needs to get his head out his ass. You should help him Harry. It might be to stuck up there and too hard to pull it out all by himself.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 04 Oct 2014 5:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Winchestergirl (Anonymous)
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Great story can't believe I hadn't found it until now. Hope you will continue!
Any plans to continue the story?????
Interesting, different, but interesting, so far anyway.
This is good! A little shorter than I would have liked, but enjoyable nonetheless - keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're reading this story and enjoying it. Could you maybe take a look at the story notes I just put on here and offer me an opinion as my confidence in this story had just taken a really bigh knock... Thanks again.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 18 Apr 2010 1:37 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating looking forward to the dinner and some more Severus
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're reading this story and enjoying it. Could you maybe take a look at the story notes I just put on here and offer me an opinion as my confidence in this story had just taken a really bigh knock... Thanks again.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Dec 2009 2:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A little rushed at the start and I would have liked a little back story but great idea and I liked the interaction between the boys. I'm looking forward to reading the next part. Thank you for writing
so intriquing-I am excited for more
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