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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Blue Christmas 18 Sep 2022 5:38 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    Your nephew must have been a damn smart kid, talking when Harry did. Every kids different, so I guess you do what you want. Fanfics are cool like that. 😏
Title: Blue Christmas 16 Nov 2015 12:14 pm
Reviewer: marty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You right so many stories using other people characters and your so good I think you should just publish your story for real it would be amazing.that way rowling isnt getting credit for your ideas
Title: Blue Christmas 26 Dec 2009 5:55 am
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely. I'm not really keen on reading baby!fics, but I'm thoroughly enjoying this one. And it's quite amusing to watch Severus tackle all the baby problems. :)

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry will really be a handful, and it's awful to take care of a baby when they're sick that way. It really tests you.

    Glad you're enjoying this and this will also show Harry growing up, not just as a little baby.

Title: Blue Christmas 16 Dec 2009 4:52 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely but hasn't anyone noticed that Harry is not at home?

    Author's Response: No, it's only been twenty four hours since he's been gone and the wards wouldn't have alerted anyone that something was wrong because they only alert, at least in the book, when a DE tries to breach them. Also, they don't seem to activate if Harry is being hurt or threatened by his relatives, no one ever knew they starved him or locked him in a cupboard in the books. Or treated him like a slave, until Harry chose to tell some of it to Ron and Hermione. My guess is Dumbledore just assumed they would care for him and didn't really bother keeping too close an eye on him.  
Title: Blue Christmas 13 Dec 2009 10:11 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I so love this fic and your Sev is just gorgeous, I love how fast he's warming up to little Harry and yet it's not rushed in the slightest, very very gorgeous ^^
    Dont you just wanna hug sick!Harry? He just sounded so uncomfortable, you wrote that so well ^^
    Best christmas fic I've read in ages with lots and lots of cute h/c and Snapeyness... very nice, cant wait for more ^^

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much. I was almost afraid I was going too fast with the bonding thing, but I know from experience that nothing helps a bond between two people or an animal and a person or whatever than nursing a sick person or animal back to health.

    Oh yes, I did. I wanted to hug him and kiss him, poor baby! That scene comes from my own personal experience with a sick baby nephew not too long ago.

    Aww! That's so sweet! And now you can see the next chapter for more cuteness and Harry and Sev bonding.  

Title: Blue Christmas 12 Dec 2009 9:37 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that perhaps Severus will try to find someone who can help him keep Harry. He is certainly the best choice of care-giver as he already cares about him and while his financial situation isn't perhaps the best at this time, surely there is someway for him to be able to swing it. I wonder if he could talk to Dumbledore about this or would the old man try to take Harry back to those awful people again?

    Author's Response: he really is and if he could just catch a break he would have no problem with Harry living with him.  That's why he hasn't gone to him, because he's afraid the old man will try to take Harry away, but perhaps something else will happen to help Severus keep Harry.
Title: Blue Christmas 12 Dec 2009 5:02 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your Snape and Harry fics and this is an awesome one as well. I feel sorry that Harry is so sick. I wonder what Severus is going to do. I bet he somehow keeps him because you love writing those kinds of stories and they are awesome to read. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. This story is getting me into the Christmas mood. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'm glad you're enjoying this one too! I love Christmas stories and this one is turning out well so far.  Hope I have it finished by Christmas.
Title: Blue Christmas 12 Dec 2009 3:48 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, Severus finally got some help and sleep! I know what it's like to take care of a cranky sick baby and it's not fun at all. You wrote that part beautifully! I loved the bear too! So cute!

    I think Harry is great how you wrote him and look forward to what's next.

    Author's Response: No, it's hard and I've taken care of many sick babies just like that. Glad you're enjoying the story and please keep on reading!
Title: Blue Christmas 12 Dec 2009 3:32 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the part with the bear it was so totally Sev and Harry! I'm glad Severus finally got some sleep and some help for Harry. I really hope he can keep Harry, please!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely comments. I liked that part too, it was inspired by a bear that my nephew used to sleep with as a baby. He will now murder me for revealing his secret.  Read on and you'll see whether or not that happens.
Title: Blue Christmas 12 Dec 2009 3:26 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I'm so loving this! It's so sweet to see Snape mellowing towards the baby and Harry is just adorable1 I want to pick him up and squeeze him.

    Author's Response: Me too! Me too! I want to hug him and pinch his cheeks, LOL!

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