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Reviews For Away in a Manger
BTW, kids speak in full sentences much earlier than two. I've noticed this in fanfics a lot and pretty much all the kids I know were capable of simple sentences already at one though girls do tend to be ahead of boys in this. Author's Response: Thanks and I like them too! Harry will be little for several more chapters and then gradually grow until he goes off to Hogwarts and this story will go up to his first year, to the end of the second term. So you'll have lots of chances to see baby Harry and his discoveries. Yes, I know, and I have several nieces and nephews who spoke much earlier than two. It really depends on the child though and some reviewers think harry's is too advanced as compared with children they know or have. But I patterned Harry after several of my own nephews at the same age, who happen to be really early talkers and very smart. And my mom tells me I talked at eleven months and by the time I was two could speak full sentences and never shut up. Here's a new chapter for you! :) Hope you enjoy it.
Author's Response: No, he isn't. He rjected Lucius' offer, see the first chapter for details, and he's just a struggling young Potions Master, has nothing to do with Voldy, Albus, the Order of the Phoenix or any kind of spying. He was never dark at all. He doesn't trust Dumbledore and he's afraid if he does reveal that he has Harry, Harry will be taken away from him, since he's poor and can't afford much. After all, Harry is the "saviour" of the wizarding world and Dumbledore thinks Muggles should take care of him instead. Harry is Sev's last link to Lily as well.
Author's Response: Wow that's really cool! I thought of that idea when a customer came into B & N where I work and had a kind of snugglie on their back with a baby in it. Yes, that's true. harry has been made to feel that it's always been his fault if something goes wrong. But if he's going to be living permanently with Severus, he'll soon realize that's not the case. I've just posted again!
Author's Response: Yeah wouldn't that be so wonderful! Well, one never knows about Dumbledore, he can be pretty oblivious when he thinks he's right and he thought it was a wonderful idea to leave Harry on the Dursleys doorstep. Just updated, in case you haven't gotten the alert.
Thank you for updating durring this crazy time of year--you brighten my day! As for "how soon" well sooner is always better! ;-) but be sure you take time to enjoy the holliday season. V. Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try and get the next one out as soon as I can. If only i weren't so busy . . .
Author's Response: Thanks and I have!
Author's Response: See the next part for more with Sev's grandfather. Thanks for R & R ing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter's up now.
Author's Response: Thanks! The bath part was pretty funny. As for Sev telling his boss where to stick it . . .read the next chapter for that one. :)
Author's Response: Yes Smithers is. And someday Harry will understand and appreciate all Severus has done for him. The next chappie's up by the way! |
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