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Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 14 Apr 2021 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I just hope there's no problems from the deception about harry's parents. This augustus guy could easily write snape off for it
Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 26 Dec 2009 6:32 am
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I really like Augustus. It's very believable actually that, despte his grudge towards Eileen's choice of husband, he would be willing to accept Severus and Harry. After all, he's not immortal and staying angry with the past is pretty useless. It may sound morbid, but most old people are like that. I would know - my grandfather is very keen on making amends with his past, and he's almost ninety.

    Nice chappie. I'm really glad for Severus and Harry. And Augustus too. :)

    Author's Response:

    No, it doesn't sound morbid at all. My dad's been doing a few things like that for years, trying to let go of old grudges, because an Italian man can hold a grudge for years . .. they invented the vendetta after all. 

    All of them deserve each other and should make a happy family.  Though on occasion Sev and Augustus will butt heads.

    Thanks again for R & R ing!

Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 21 Dec 2009 5:45 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked Augustus! Also the portraits made Severus so uncomfortable lol! Harry is so cute. :3

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Augustus will be around a lot in this fic as support. Yeah Sev isn't used to people praising him and commenting on little Harry.
Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 18 Dec 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter--good introduction to Augustus. But the timeline where Augustus talks abouta why he's unafraid to say Voldemort's name seems a little off. He says, "Bah! He is naught but another dark wizard, like Asmodean in my grandfather’s time, and Grindelwald before him." Shouldn't he rather have said "...and Grindelwald more recently since." If Grindelwald happened during the 1940's, then that was not "before {Asmodean}" but after. Minor quibble--other than that, wonderful chapter!

    Author's Response:

    You're right, I meant to go fix that, since it's and awkward sentence. Thanks for reminding me.

    Hope you enjoy my most recent chapter! Thanks for reading!

Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 17 Dec 2009 2:28 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww1 So cute! Good for Sev's grandpa and Harry was so funny! I really hate that Smithers. Sev is well rid of him. Blech!

    Author's Response: Thanks and you're right about Smithers, Severus doesn't need to take that kind of crap. Nobody does.
Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 16 Dec 2009 11:50 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! This story is brilliant. Can't wait to see more of the Snapes as a family. So very in the spirit of the Christmas season.

    Augsutus reminds me of an elder Severus and Harry is just too adorable!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, that's just what I wanted to hear. 

    I;ve posted again so now you can read some more!

Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 16 Dec 2009 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally got a chance to review this1 I love Augustus and the last part with Harry blowing that raspberry was priceless.

    Severus' quoted Hermie in Rudolph the Red-nosed Reindeer, "You can't fire me, I quit."

    Woot! My favorite movie!

    Please post the next chapter soon!

    Author's Response:

    Yhanks so much and . . .you're right!!

    Congratulations!!

     

    I've just posted the next part so have fun reading!

Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 16 Dec 2009 5:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter Harry charms all but I htink his mischief making will win out soon

    Author's Response: Oh yes, it will! Definitely! I've just posted my next chapter!
Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 16 Dec 2009 8:03 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad Sev found a safety net in Augustus. This way he can keep Harry and not worry. I want them together. Love your story.

    Author's Response: Thanks and Severus was very licky. Augustus could have been another nasty one like Smithers or even Tobias. But he wasn't. I love them together too.
Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 16 Dec 2009 7:23 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Love Severus' grandfather.....very loyal to family. Why doesn't Severus do a blood adoptions, then Harry will be his son by blood??? So much of the deset?? Love Harry's parting to Severus' former boss....I almost wet my pants! Thank you for this great Christmas Story.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's Augustus down to a T.  He's very loyal and a traditionalist and will do almost anything for his family.

    Severus might want to do a blood adoption, but in order to so it, the adoptee (Harry) has to be able to consent and know why he's being adopted. Also there has to be a witness present who knows both parties and Severus doesn't want anyone to know that he has Harry. 

    OMG, you didn't! Thanks so much! I have updated again!


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