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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I loved how you brought the Prince family history in without making it a lecture. The use of the decorations made it more poignant. Thanks for the chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks again!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 4:13 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, nice background on the Princes.

    Author's Response: Thank you and I've posted more!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 3:57 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so sweet and I loved hearing about the Prince Family. The Snape's are really fitting in nicely with their new granfather/great-grandfather, and little Harry sounds so adorable.

    Hmmmm...I think that Harry's middle name is Trouble!!

    Author's Response:

    Ha! I think you're right. It is! He's just full of Mischief.

    And they really are fitting in nicely with each other.

Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 3:51 am
Reviewer: CraftyMomChick (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked all the family background information. I also liked how Harry came to the rescue when his "Drandpa" was sad. So sweet. Happy Holiday to you and your family.

    Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! Same too you and I have a new updated for you!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 1:02 am
Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Signed) [Report This]
    awww... very cute :)

    Author's Response: Thanks and here's a new chappie for you!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 17 Dec 2009 11:28 pm
Reviewer: Sukisho816 (Signed) [Report This]
    This story makes my heart happy. :)

    Author's Response: Yay! That's great to hear and I have some more posted!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 17 Dec 2009 9:33 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good to reminence about loved ones lost, but you also must be careful not to get too maudlin over it. You need to live your life and find joy in it, even with them gone. I'm really glad that Severus contacted Augustus; both of them needed a family to connect with and now these two lonely men have found a slice of happiness. It's wonderful to see Harry so happy and I hope that Severus will be able to continue to protect him from those that would use him.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yes, becoming a family with Augustus was what they all needed and Harry will keep them in stitches and wanting to pull their hair out. Severus will do his best to do so.
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 17 Dec 2009 8:14 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    nice, lovely, gentle :)

    Author's Response: Thanks and now you can check out the next part. 
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 17 Dec 2009 7:21 pm
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    this chapter had me saying aww alot!LOL im so glad that arry and Severus get to have a normal christmas. And I love it how you made the House elves almost like humans. i hated the way that in the books they were treated as slaves and filth. well done. 100 house points to you!
    ~Shannon

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I needed that. :)

    I wanted to write the elves somewhat differently here, since I think the Princes would have treeated them more like beloved retainers than slaves like the Malfoys. They're that kind of people. I never liked the way they were treated in the books either and how hardly anyone seemed to mind. Then again, I guess it was similar to the attitude the South had during the Civil War regarding slavery. It was accepted because it had been going on so long it had become a way of life to some southern people.  Even Ron, who supposedly has a decent family and isn't really prejudiced, tells Hermione that the elves "like" working for the wizards and would be unhappy if they didn't. But I think that the elves grew used to being bound to a wizard and not having free will to choose and when given freedom, don't know what to do with it or how to react, like Winky, who regarded her "freedom" as a form of failure to obey her master.

    Anyway, glad you liked the chapter, you'll be seeing more of the elves and the next chapter is up.

Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 17 Dec 2009 6:06 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh that was a lovely, if sad, part with Augustus telling them about the history of the ornaments, im so glad that he has Harry and Severus to make his life a bit brighter :)

    Author's Response: Yes it wa ssad but at least he has some family left he can lean on and Harry will remind him all too well of what it's like to have a small child in the house again. Just read the next part to see what I mean.

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